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Imperfection

A tear fell from one eye and then another. This agitation formed a perfect pearl. A gem that was so flawless when discovered that it became the envy of the world. Hearts hold secret longings beyond measure that are not on display for all to see. Many selfish motives are the pleasure as each one seeks their own propriety. A joy inside can radiate like fire, and looks on through the bleakness and despair to see a place where caring can aspire believing only good things can live there. A thought passed from one mind on to another. The guarded locks clearly had been broken. A passage to enchantment was uncovered. But priceless words of love remained unspoken. 12/6/17

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Date: 2/8/2018 11:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Janis! Great choice for the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/8/2018 7:58:00 PM
Your poem is perfection Janis, in content, imagery, rhythm and rhyme. Pure bliss to read, especially aloud. Enthralling and enchanting. Congratulations on your winning poem. ~Susan
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Date: 2/5/2018 9:24:00 PM
Congrats, Janis, on this winning poem.
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Date: 2/5/2018 4:23:00 PM
An excellent choice Janis.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, I am happy you entered and the poem will be showcased..
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Date: 12/7/2017 6:29:00 AM
wow this is an excellent poem.. Very deep and the flow and rhyme is very good..
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Date: 12/6/2017 4:12:00 PM
So true...All the best Janis
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Date: 12/6/2017 12:17:00 PM
Your IP makes for very pretty reading.
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