Get Your Premium Membership

Imperfection

Stars Mute ancient witnesses Deep in a universe where the magic of matter is made With your Cyclopean eyes You saw how Earth’s inhabitants grew How we evolved and stood up on our feet Turning grunts into speech Paws into hands How fire amazed us And the wheel And the secrets of atoms I am asking you, stars Have we humans become so perfect That we are able to see our imperfections?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/9/2013 10:39:00 AM
Great question that you ask..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 5/7/2013 10:04:00 PM
Betim, Congratulations with your awesome win in Lisa's " Bringin' in the Stars contest." always~ LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 5/7/2013 10:12:00 AM
Wonderful write! Congats on your win~A.O
Login to Reply
Date: 5/5/2013 10:28:00 PM
Congratulations... :-)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/5/2013 9:24:00 PM
I really like this one. What wonderful thoughts. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 7/10/2011 7:58:00 AM
Betim, a great job, very pleased to see a near the top win for you in Nette's contest. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 7/10/2011 7:24:00 AM
Congrats Betim on your fantastic win with this brilliant beauty luv..on zodiac zones...enjoy..
Login to Reply
Date: 7/10/2011 5:06:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of nette, Betim
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2011 10:22:00 AM
The last three lines I appreciate it as very meaningful, Betim
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2011 7:52:00 AM
You must have watched "2001-A Space Odyssey" recently. Your work is very descriptive.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things