James Fraser Poet Tanka

Impending

We are not alone
comets and meteorites
unwelcomed guests
the eventual outcome
cataclysmically, quiet

The outlook after 
our lands in sporadic grief
the sun, now shadows
devastation so abounds
our oasis, our Earth, gone










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Shannon Deane May 14, 2011 at 10:11 AM Very epic write Sir...

Carolyn Devonshire May 13, 2011 at 3:23 PM Well, the dinosaurs' extinction is attributed to the type of cataclysm you describe, James. Hopi Indian predictions are along the same line of thought. Very intriguing and well done, James. Love, Carolyn

Gwendolen Song May 13, 2011 at 2:46 PM James, Are you going Nostradamus on me here? ha ha. The concept of our sun, our oasis, shadowing devastation is unique and clever. Great take on words. Thanks for sharing this gifted write. Gwendolen