Impatiens
Impatiens
Today, on the road into town,
touch me nots
hovered all around.
They glided even in the
absence of a breeze
up and down, to and fro.
They dotted the air like
snowflakes falling up from a
meadow before falling down
back toward the ground.
I pulled my truck over, got out,
and stood amidst them.
They fell around me fighting for
flight so light that a brush of my
hand sent them rushing on
through their plight.
Impatiens are
wonderful flowers
giving themselves up in
beautiful showers
more vibrant,
it seems,
in death
then in life.
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