Impatience

Impatience

The Millennials
stand in front of microwaves
yelling...HURRY UP!  

-by Edlynn Nau
 ©April 14, 2019

humorousperspectivesenryu

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Connie Marcum Wong

May 23, 2019 at 12:17 AM

That is so true. Everything needs to be instant for them. My grandkids are not allowed to ever tell me they are bored. When they said that to me one time I gave them so much to do that they will never tell me that again. Lol I love the humor in this piece and it actually made me laugh so thank you for that my friend. A brilliant little senryu! : )

Edlynn Nau

May 23, 2019 at 2:56 AM

Thank you so much Connie and I’m pleased it made you laugh. It was my intention to combine truth and humor. I cannot always pull it off. Observing kids can sure give us something to write about and that is for certain.

Jan Terry

April 16, 2019 at 11:48 AM

There you go! Your humorous self is back. A concise take on Millennials. LOL Love it. Hugs.

Edlynn Nau

April 16, 2019 at 2:18 PM

LOL! I find Senryu is a perfect genre for humor... dark or light. Thank you for spending your time here and for stopping in. I plan on stopping to read a couple of yours today too!

Paul Callus

April 15, 2019 at 9:51 AM

No wonder we grumble that life is become too fast! Looking forward to split-second travelling...and that elusive time machine. Love your sense of humour, Edlynn. ~ Regards // paul

Edlynn Nau

April 15, 2019 at 9:58 AM

Ah I’m glad you got a smile out of this. Agree with you! Most are living at warp speed and are missing the first best things. HA I wrote a poem about Time Machines... there are many! Thanks for reading Paul.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

April 14, 2019 at 10:41 PM

Exactly. Expressed to a T

Edlynn Nau

April 15, 2019 at 9:50 AM

I see that impatience in everything but I hoped this said it. Thanks Allen for stopping by.

Robert Lindley

April 14, 2019 at 7:25 PM

Love it! I remember our mom and our grandmother both cooking on a wood stove. They were truly great cooks and never rushed it, rushing does not increase flavor or quality. Short, sweet and to the point ..

Edlynn Nau

April 14, 2019 at 7:32 PM

LOL! My great Aunt did a wood stove. Grandmother was cooking with gas! Both were amazing cooks with everything from scratch. Oh to have another meal at grandma’s. Thanks for eyeing this one. Evelyn Wood Speedreading required!