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Impact of Winds

tears carved vacant craters of faceless grin

fake smile wrestled with mute hollow mark

masked terror scorched a defenceless skin

soiled canvass shed masked terror in the dark


breathless submerged by cascades of sorrow

she lived charades of miscarried contempt

past smeared foul water with no tomorrow

yet the wind whispered one final attempt


she bowed to the rain and slippery grounds

took of her veil and braved the naked truth

opened floodgates to inner voice’s sounds

they had abused her and stolen her youth


she embraced assaults and gathered raw pain

harvested anger reaped rage braved her fear

wondered whether she would live once again

would ever find ways to hold herself dear


the cliff edge stood firm for one faithful move

spread overdue wings of hope trust and dreams

vowed on impact there was nothing to prove 

except crushed horror and oppressor’s screams 


16th November 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/30/2020 9:25:00 AM
Dark but lovely telling Kai. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 11/28/2020 10:25:00 PM
Hi Kai Michael, You have penned a well-written impactful write. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/28/2020 7:49:00 PM
This is as the title suggests impactful, thanks for the entry, nice to see your placement Kai!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/1/2020 11:52:00 AM
Thank you John ...

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