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immutable muse

as the mourning sky w e e p s and crimson clouds crackle bursting forth blazing bristles resembling roaring rage within bruised blades of lamented leaves fed to the aching soul of Mother Nature my heart quivers~ wishing love could bloom an opalescent dream across the grief-struck spheres where storms crash upon selfless seas awaiting tender lips of tulips from seraphic streaks sleepless amidst the trembling zephyr while h o p e floats like mists of velvety vapor... if only I could be the immutable muse moon-drop maiden amidst deepest sorrows of dahlia dusks and fluorescent flares of delicate dawns ~ if only I could be the sanguine song in the hyacinth heart of mellifluous moonlight... if only there were no pain nor angst perhaps then metaphors of misery would be forsaken poetry would thrive ~ rhymes of love would be the rosemary rhythm... cathartically cradling turbulent twilight like fireflies flickering neon gold against the electric pulse of midnight...

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Date: 4/11/2025 3:57:00 AM
Dearest Inky,This is just… wow. It hits deep. I honestly felt every word—you have this way of turning pain into something so achingly beautiful. The imagery is unreal, like I could see the crimson skies and feel that trembling hope floating through the sorrow. Lines like “moon-drop maiden” and “metaphors of misery” really stayed with me—they’re so delicate but powerful. It’s like your soul is speaking straight to the page. ...Love and Light
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Date: 4/11/2025 10:50:00 AM
Awwn that means alot to me getting a wow from you dear beautiful maria, thank you so very much truly always for your selfless support
Date: 4/11/2025 1:58:00 AM
- Sensitive and beautiful as always, Ink :) - Let hope always float - Have a great weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 4/11/2025 1:58:00 PM
Thank you so much dear anne lise for always being so supportive grateful truly
Date: 4/10/2025 10:06:00 PM
Very nice, IE -- divine poetry. Great imagery. The closest to heaven on earth, are love and poetry. In my ideal world anyway. Blessings.
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Date: 4/11/2025 1:54:00 PM
So true, and how beautiful is your comment! Thank you so very much dear joe! Always grateful for your kind support
Date: 4/10/2025 2:37:00 PM
Truly beautiful, as expected. I have been away for some time, but I am getting to your poems...your beautiful work never fails. <3
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Date: 4/11/2025 1:50:00 PM
I did notice you were away! So happy to see you here today! Thank you always for remembering me! Sending you light always
Date: 4/10/2025 6:44:00 AM
I believe with all my heart and soul that the day when pain and angst will be gone forever is just around the bend. At that time poetic expressions of love and peace and the pure joy of living will abound. Till then, we cope. Awesome poetry Inky
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Date: 4/11/2025 10:54:00 AM
Thats really scary the thought of it, wonder whats next. Eternal peace? I hope so, thank you for reading, commenting, etc. hope you are well. Sending you light always
Date: 4/9/2025 4:50:00 PM
urgent, see my soupmail
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Date: 4/11/2025 10:53:00 AM
Omg sweet andrea, this comment made my heart stop, i thought someone died! So glad no one did hahaha literally! Im just about to write for daniels contest. Will be back to commenting soon! Sending you light always
Date: 4/9/2025 2:31:00 PM
If only Ink but if we existed in a perfect world we wouldnt get to read exquisite poetry like yours. i love your word choices, alliteration and wish I could write like you do! hugs jan x
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Date: 4/11/2025 10:52:00 AM
Thank you so much dear jan, this is such a thoughtful and kind comment, i really appreciate you praising my poem and i wish too i can write fun limericks like you do really. Appreciate your support always
Date: 4/9/2025 1:44:00 PM
IE, if only indeed! You're describing and hoping for a better world where we could celebrate the beautiful and where pain and misery get the penalty box. It's quite something to feel and describe all this from the point of view of a muse. Thanks for this inspiring perspective. It means you, as do many, long for love and peace. It should only happen! Smiles!
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Date: 4/11/2025 10:51:00 AM
Youv understood my poem so well! Sometimes i wish for peace a little bit more and i wish the world would just be a better place for all
Date: 4/9/2025 12:04:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "immutable muse" write. Love It... Your pen was working over time again. Have a great/blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 4/11/2025 10:50:00 AM
Thank you so much dear paula always for your support
Date: 4/9/2025 11:44:00 AM
Amazing write .
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Date: 4/11/2025 10:50:00 AM
Thank you dahlin

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