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Immovable Cows

IMMOVABLE COWS Lovely are the meadows sweet Clover for the cows a treat. For me cool air! Cattle chew around my feet With nose wet each foot they greet As I lie there. Cows don’t tolerate the heat Sometimes lie or take a seat - Near my skin bare! Fields are full of them and me Enjoying the shade of tree. Washed round my face All their noses wet I see, Lurking near me, two or three. With little grace, I shoo them away from me: I want all my field space free: I offer chase. Like a cowboy with no horse I’m whooping, yelling of course. They barely move. I decide to use more force - Try to prickle them with gorse. Me Boss - must prove! I shout till my throat is hoarse; But cow moves I can’t enforce. They won’t remove ! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written by Sydney Peck Entered in David Williams's Contest Virelai

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/27/2012 11:18:00 AM
AHA, a Virelai!! I'm trying to remember now what I did myself for this form. I think you made yours more stanzas and that's why it seems different to me. I think you picked a very interesting topic to try this form with. HAve you ever heard of cow tipping? I'm not sure but i guess a bunch of rowdy teens just all go to a poor cow and tip it over at night. maybe that's what needed done to the cows in your poem!
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