Immortality

To live forever! Think how it might be! Oh Fount of Youth more prized than all earth’s gold. To be as ancient gods and not grow old! To banish all disease and see death flee before the face of immortality! With less to dread, would we become more bold? Alas, the fate of mortals is foretold. We live with dying and its misery. But death is not the end. We’re here to learn. The planet Earth is our brief testing ground, and when we die, our spirits then take flight. Perhaps to earth in new forms we return! But to our graves I know we are not bound because, at last, we’ll travel to God’s light. March 3, 2017 An Italian Sonnet for Broken Wing's I Form( Immortal theme) Poetry Contest Now for ''I'' Contest New Or Old Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France (thanks for letting us resurrect older poems!)
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La France Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 5:25 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this beautiful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 11:34 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Immortality" is a creative story/write. Love your line "because, at last, we’ll travel to God’s light." Oh yes, heaven a waits. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
Poet Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 5:22 AM
Andrea, congratulations on winning the contest. I really liked your poetry; it's one of my favorites, and the form is beautiful as well.
Alex Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 10:00 PM
A beautiful Italian Sonnet. Depicts the philosophy of death. Beautiful Work. Congratulations!
Nehls Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 7:00 AM
Hi Andrea. This is such a fine Italian Sonnet. The wisdom of the ages are written into these lines and I must give it a 7 and favorite and read it many times. A pleasure, my friend.... Robert.
Henderson Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 12:05 PM
You make an old man feel good, twisting the nuance of his favorite form. Well done dear. love your work, always have,
Duncan Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 7:24 PM
I think of this everytime I watch a vampire move or some other inmortality movie. And I think of how lonely they are. She Slet was about the spirits watching over her :)
Poteet Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 12:39 PM
Great thoughts on the eternal soul of mankind, immortality from the image of God. I like this Italian sonnet form. Congratulations on your placement, well-deserved.
Beaufort Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 5:17 PM
A great thought. It's something we can hope for, but there is no guarantee for any of us. I would be satisfied to have a good life.
La France Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 3:01 PM
Andrea congratulations on your win in my contest ~
Lawless Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 3:59 PM
Ah, the eternal question..."To be, or not to be, immortal.....nicely written Andrea.
Y. Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 8:59 PM
WoW! Andrea, this is a well written deep thought provoking piece. It gives the reader something to think about.I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
Austin Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 11:00 AM
Getting caught up. Your poem is so much what I believe, I get a chill in reading it. This is mighty fine, Andrea. Love, daver
Wolves Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 5:48 PM
Wonderful poem speaking out in truth. Niiiice one.
Thirtyseven Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 7:51 AM
I should check out more of this contest, as immortality is pet fascination of mine. For you see scientists are now saying that aging is a disease, and as such a cure can be found. I told a 19 yr old recently not to be surprised if she lived to 150, and wasn't allowed to retire until 120 :) Immortality scares me silly, why would anyone want it??? As Queen said, "who wants to live forever?"
Godwin Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 8:10 PM
WOW, I see current dialogues in the pen of this poem! You know already that I embrace the contents and you delivered them with such passion, Andrea. This is beautiful, deep, soul stirring and definitely food for much thought. My eyes went wide and my adrenaline jumped! Hugs ... CayCay
Deb Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 1:32 PM
well explained thought ...loved the worthy piece dear poet.
Walker Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Love the flow of this thought provoking poem.
Anish Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 9:33 PM
I hope you are right! Good poem and good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Krampe Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 6:38 PM
Great sonnet and lovely sentiment, Andrea. Good luck in the contest.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 6:26 PM
Wonderful lines, Andrea, and I agree that death is not the final chapter but another beginning. I loved the line about earth being a testing ground.
May Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 3:07 PM
Great sonnet Andrea... something to contemplate..
Zerlaut Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 7:31 AM
This is a beautiful sonnet Andrea. It leaves me feeling warm and at peace. A sense as always when involving God that finality is never finality.
Kannan Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 5:01 AM
A great sonnet Andrea... Thought provoking write...Good luck with the contest...
Alhemaidy Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 3:00 AM
What an enjoyed read! Seven plus. Thank you for sharing this wonderful excellent Italian Sonnet.
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