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Immortality

One day, 
The comfort of the night
And the will of my might
was no longer enough for me.

So I came out
Bravely into the light,
Unaware of how bright
It once was.

And I took 
One glance at the sun,
And before my staring had even begun,
I felt the pain.

My skin seared,
It burned and smoked.
And without a grimace, I remained unprovoked,
And turned back to the morning sky.

And as the pain
Flowed freely throughout my totality
I proudly shunned immortality
And let the day's effects take place.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 6/22/2016 11:25:00 PM
Anais, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your awesome words today. ~SKAT~
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Date: 12/15/2011 6:20:00 AM
I'm a huge fan of vampires and enjoyed this poem greatly.
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