Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

Immortality

Wishing time could just stand still 
Divine perfection in every moment
Tonight’s unparalleled emotion shared
Frozen to be remembered for all times



- excerpt from my poem MEMORIES IN THE MAKING -


AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted September 10, 2021 for "I" OLD OR NEW contest sponsored by CONSTANCE LAFRANCE  -  RANKED 2ND

and for contest 'ARBITRIUM DIVISA 2' sponsored by GREGORY R BARDEN - RANKED 4TH

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Constance La France September 15, 2021 at 5:49 AM Line, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this wonderful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance

Paula Goldsmith September 11, 2021 at 11:46 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "IMMORTALITY" is a creative write. Few words with much said. Have a blessed day/weekend................. Line Gauthier September 11, 2021 at 1:46 PM Thank you very much, Paula ~

Caren Krutsinger June 23, 2019 at 3:59 AM Good luck in the contest, I recognized this verse and like it as well this time as I did in the first reading. Line Gauthier June 23, 2019 at 8:05 AM Thank you, Caren. Much appreciated.