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Immortality

Wishing time could just stand still Divine perfection in every moment Tonight’s unparalleled emotion shared Frozen to be remembered for all times - excerpt from my poem MEMORIES IN THE MAKING - AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted September 10, 2021 for "I" OLD OR NEW contest sponsored by CONSTANCE LAFRANCE - RANKED 2ND and for contest 'ARBITRIUM DIVISA 2' sponsored by GREGORY R BARDEN - RANKED 4TH Originally posted on June 22, 2019

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Constance La France

Date: 9/15/2021 5:49:00 AM

Line, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this wonderful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/11/2021 11:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "IMMORTALITY" is a creative write. Few words with much said. Have a blessed day/weekend.................

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/11/2021 1:46:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paula ~

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/23/2019 3:59:00 AM

Good luck in the contest, I recognized this verse and like it as well this time as I did in the first reading.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/23/2019 8:05:00 AM

Thank you, Caren. Much appreciated.