Immortal Time

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"IMMORTAL TIME" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN 31 JULY 2017, MY PHOTO,©

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Children of time we are that our father's face never saw-mortals while he forever living! © Demetrios Trifiatis 31 July 2017

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/31/2017 7:32:00 AM

- Children of today do not have religion as subjects at school, in Norway - Lovely written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/31/2017 7:49:00 AM

That is a shame! Here the leftist government wishes to do the same. Hope they will never succeed! Thank you for your lovely visit and comment dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs!

Silent One

Date: 7/31/2017 5:54:00 AM

Yes!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/31/2017 7:47:00 AM

Thanks!

Maria Williams

Date: 7/31/2017 5:46:00 AM

Hello my friend Demetrios, your nice lesson reminds us about our morality...Maria

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/31/2017 7:50:00 AM

I do not think that anyone needs me to remind him of his mortality dearest, friend, Maria! haha!Thank you so much my dear friend for your lovely visits and comments!

White Wolf

Date: 7/31/2017 4:15:00 AM

I see you are in a chronos mood today, my friend! Time and space fascinate me to no end! Excuse the pun! Lovely monoku, Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/31/2017 7:55:00 AM

As I get older it fascinates me more and more my friend for i can't make heads over tail! Haha! Thank you dear, WW. So wonderful to see you again!

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/31/2017 3:52:00 AM

Isn't it interesting how we are restricted to time, but He is not. In fact He isn't restricted to anything but that which is Himself. In our mortal state we see time ever encompassing. You write tells it all in such few words my friend! I truly loved reading this illustrious and stunning poem this morning! You have given me a treat today Demetrios! Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/31/2017 8:05:00 AM

Absolutely it is of much interest my friend, Russell! Thank you so much for taking the time not only to read my poems but to comment in detail as well! I appreciate it my good friend! God bless you!