Immortal Love Threads

For Timothy Lee
We skip and dance our love thru every chance. My true love freed you, your true love freed me and as a true we, we grow bright our free. The greatest gift of our soulmate romance is living sincere through time’s circumstance. Immortal love does life authentic be for sincere joins force with eternity when love is glance-gold woven in advance. Perhaps, no surely, we have loved before; felt our souls merge deep within seeds of time. Perhaps, no surely, reaped in each one’s core, immortal love supports twin soulmates’ shine. Every again, and new, thru my eye’s door, I recognize that I have always been thine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/25/2018 9:21:00 PM
I have come to believe in re-incarnation over the years, both because of my own experiences and logic as well-- your poem captures well the sense that love never goes away.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 1/26/2018 7:30:00 AM
Hi, LJ - and thank you for reading an 'older' posting; so quickly poems disappear under other postings, way before they should. The more I study reincarnation, the more it feels correct. I wish you the best possible journey to discover ... ! Be blessed and thank you for blessing me with your 'presence.' CayCay
Date: 11/11/2017 8:20:00 PM
CayCat, such a beautiful and inspired write. Excellent theme and rhymes and a pure pleasure to read, no wonder it got a well deserved top spot. Enjoyed!
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 11/12/2017 5:42:00 PM
Thank you, Susan - it is special to all of us, I think, when an older posting gets read. A gift, really. So thank you again for honoring me what this gift full of kindness and encouragement! Blessings ... CayCay
Date: 3/26/2017 4:49:00 PM
Love stems from a solid beginning, and then it has to be nurtured in order to keep make it last. Hurdles will crop up many a time, but perseverance, dialogue and understanding all help to keep love alive. You wrote a most lovely sonnet, CayCay; very worthy of its top placement! Regards // paul
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Date: 3/21/2017 8:12:00 PM
Great job with the sonnet form. Congrats on a top placement. Blessings, Janis.
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Date: 3/21/2017 7:44:00 AM
Congrats on your lovely sonnet, CayCay!
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Date: 3/20/2017 10:15:00 PM
This is getting pretty routine Hoohumm, congratulations CayCay ,well deserved...
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Date: 3/20/2017 10:12:00 AM
Caycay CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest ~
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Date: 3/20/2017 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations CayCay, such a wonderful Italian Sonnet which deserves top spot, so pleased, Roy. :))
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Date: 3/6/2017 8:46:00 AM
This is a beautiful portrayal of your love, Caycay. Soupmail!
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Date: 3/6/2017 4:56:00 AM
This poem sounds like something she will like CayCay. It is lovely! 7 : )
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Date: 3/5/2017 8:44:00 AM
- Excellent sonnet, CayCay :) - Happy Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/5/2017 5:31:00 PM
Hey, Smiley! Good to see you and thank you for the excellent word. Hugs and blessings ... CayCay
Date: 3/5/2017 8:25:00 AM
So rhythmic and beautiful, CayCay:) enjoyed thoroughly, a 7:) should be a winner:)
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/5/2017 5:34:00 PM
Thank you, Sweet Jo! Hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/4/2017 5:57:00 PM
Hi Cay Cay...I'm so happy to read your beautifully written romantic lines tonight. Wouldn't it be nice if relationships always felt like this? I love the idea of soul mates. My husband and I have been together since high school, more than 25 years. I think we're soul mates, but it still takes a lot of work and commitment....Lots of luck and hugs to you, Rhonda
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/5/2017 5:35:00 PM
Life takes a lot of work and commitment, period - doesn't it? Maybe soulmates can easier keep from growing walls in their relationship that neither can breach or scale over. Maybe! All the best ... CayCay
Date: 3/4/2017 12:07:00 PM
Soul mates are interwoven through space and time and although their names each time they meet change, their love remain forever the same dearest CayCay. A marvelous Italian Sonnet! A seven!
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Date: 3/4/2017 11:58:00 AM
"Living sincere through time's circumstance " love it! Nice one xx
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/4/2017 12:04:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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