Immortal Love Threads

For Timothy Lee
We skip and dance our love thru every chance. My true love freed you, your true love freed me and as a true we, we grow bright our free. The greatest gift of our soulmate romance is living sincere through time’s circumstance. Immortal love does life authentic be for sincere joins force with eternity when love is glance-gold woven in advance. Perhaps, no surely, we have loved before; felt our souls merge deep within seeds of time. Perhaps, no surely, reaped in each one’s core, immortal love supports twin soulmates’ shine. Every again, and new, thru my eye’s door, I recognize that I have always been thine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Carber Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 9:21 PM
I have come to believe in re-incarnation over the years, both because of my own experiences and logic as well-- your poem captures well the sense that love never goes away.
Godwin Avatar
January 26, 2018 at 7:30 AM
Hi, LJ - and thank you for reading an 'older' posting; so quickly poems disappear under other postings, way before they should. The more I study reincarnation, the more it feels correct. I wish you the best possible journey to discover ... ! Be blessed and thank you for blessing me with your 'presence.' CayCay
Ashley Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:20 PM
CayCat, such a beautiful and inspired write. Excellent theme and rhymes and a pure pleasure to read, no wonder it got a well deserved top spot. Enjoyed!
Godwin Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 5:42 PM
Thank you, Susan - it is special to all of us, I think, when an older posting gets read. A gift, really. So thank you again for honoring me what this gift full of kindness and encouragement! Blessings ... CayCay
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March 26, 2017 at 4:49 PM
Love stems from a solid beginning, and then it has to be nurtured in order to keep make it last. Hurdles will crop up many a time, but perseverance, dialogue and understanding all help to keep love alive. You wrote a most lovely sonnet, CayCay; very worthy of its top placement! Regards // paul
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March 21, 2017 at 8:12 PM
Great job with the sonnet form. Congrats on a top placement. Blessings, Janis.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 7:44 AM
Congrats on your lovely sonnet, CayCay!
Smith Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 10:15 PM
This is getting pretty routine Hoohumm, congratulations CayCay ,well deserved...
La France Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 10:12 AM
Caycay CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest ~
Pett Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 9:49 AM
Congratulations CayCay, such a wonderful Italian Sonnet which deserves top spot, so pleased, Roy. :))
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 8:46 AM
This is a beautiful portrayal of your love, Caycay. Soupmail!
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 4:56 AM
This poem sounds like something she will like CayCay. It is lovely! 7 : )
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 8:44 AM
- Excellent sonnet, CayCay :) - Happy Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Godwin Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 5:31 PM
Hey, Smiley! Good to see you and thank you for the excellent word. Hugs and blessings ... CayCay
Daniel Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 8:25 AM
So rhythmic and beautiful, CayCay:) enjoyed thoroughly, a 7:) should be a winner:)
Godwin Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 5:34 PM
Thank you, Sweet Jo! Hugs ... CayCay
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March 4, 2017 at 5:57 PM
Hi Cay Cay...I'm so happy to read your beautifully written romantic lines tonight. Wouldn't it be nice if relationships always felt like this? I love the idea of soul mates. My husband and I have been together since high school, more than 25 years. I think we're soul mates, but it still takes a lot of work and commitment....Lots of luck and hugs to you, Rhonda
Godwin Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 5:35 PM
Life takes a lot of work and commitment, period - doesn't it? Maybe soulmates can easier keep from growing walls in their relationship that neither can breach or scale over. Maybe! All the best ... CayCay
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March 4, 2017 at 12:07 PM
Soul mates are interwoven through space and time and although their names each time they meet change, their love remain forever the same dearest CayCay. A marvelous Italian Sonnet! A seven!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 11:58 AM
"Living sincere through time's circumstance " love it! Nice one xx
Godwin Avatar
March 4, 2017 at 12:04 PM
Thank you, Kim. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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