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Immortal Love

You chased me till I fell in your garden. But I hit your grave. It was your soul calling my name. I don't believe you need me. You have a perfect invisible life. Your heart speaks to me. But your mouth hurts me. I don't need this love. It's hate, to me. The thought of your words of me Distaste thee. Even after your death, you won't let go of me. I will see you in another life. Where rainbows and butterflies are bestowed upon us. And your touch is beyond us. Where our bond is trust. Your love will be enough, thus. We will live happily in lust.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/13/2016 10:55:00 PM
Happy to see this one too once again, Love LINDA
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Date: 12/24/2015 11:01:00 PM
Sorry that I previously missed replying to this contest being finished. Congrats on your well deserved win my friend.
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Date: 12/20/2015 12:32:00 AM
Abeer, Congrats on your win In Rob Carmack's Oblivion contest. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/19/2015 3:07:00 PM
ABEER, Congrats on your Oblivion WIN **SKAT**
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Date: 12/10/2015 5:00:00 PM
Abeer, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/10/2015 12:14:00 PM
Abeer, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 12/8/2015 10:40:00 PM
we will live happily in lust.. nice abeer
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Abeer Anwar
Date: 12/16/2015 10:20:00 PM
Thank you

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