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Immortal Autumn

Immortal Autumn 

Golden rays of light on fall trees
rustling seasonal memories

Tangled leaves of Autumn hues
fade to russet, turn to brown
lingering -longing to stay
falling into spring

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Hilda Greenhough

March 1, 2026 at 8:38 AM

I like this tribute to autumn. It's a reminder; I have to clean up that mess of pine cones that are still on the sidewalk.

Joe Maverick

February 2, 2026 at 8:03 AM

Soft hue's to sooth the mind..Yet the Echo's of passion here i find.' Artwork in vision, richness in words Delight to read, as i see others concur.' Hi suZ how are you getting along.?

Suzanne Delaney

February 2, 2026 at 10:20 PM

Hi Joe:Thanks for checking in. I have a bad cough at the moment. You know……winter chill. Autumn seems to be the favored child with me. Thanks for the kind words to warm my evening. Best to you, SuZ

Sam Kauffman

October 30, 2025 at 10:46 AM

Beautiful reflection on the stunning scenes of autumn, SuZ! Have to admit autumn does leave a beautiful impression on me even though I have a hard time letting go of summer! Hope you continue to get back to normal after Helene's unwelcome visit! Blessings and hugs! Wonderful to see you posting again!

Charles Messina

October 11, 2025 at 3:13 PM

So pretty, awesome time of the year. Very nicely written, SuZ! ~CM

Suzanne Delaney

October 12, 2025 at 3:23 AM

Always nice to have you visit, Charles: Thanks for reading and commenting. Blessings, SuZ

sara Etgen-Baker

October 9, 2025 at 5:57 PM

a memorable poem that captures the underlying feelings of the season....the waiting and the longing. Beautiful! Faving

Suzanne Delaney

October 12, 2025 at 3:12 AM

Lovely to see you Sara, Yes hard to believe it is here already but its beauty is always welcome. Thanks so much for the FAV.

Paula Goldsmith

October 8, 2025 at 8:33 AM

What a great time of the year with your great "Immortal Autumn" write and pretty picture. I love both. I wish you would write more. Have a Blessed day writing away.........

Suzanne Delaney

October 8, 2025 at 9:17 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Paula, I have asked my Muse why but only an occasional glimmer mostly - mostly in the fall. LOL

Daniel Henry Rodgers

October 8, 2025 at 7:29 AM

Dear Suzanne, I love Autumn. It’s not just about leaves, is it? It’s about memory, about the beauty that doesn’t want to leave. Fall sometimes feels like a soft goodbye that doesn’t quite end. Such a moment where time folds in on itself falling into spring, like grief into hope. Autumn Blessings, Dear Suzanne, Daniel

Suzanne Delaney

October 8, 2025 at 8:24 AM

Daniel, What a wonderful connection you have to the feelings of Autumn. You said it much better than I could have. Thanks for your insightful comment.

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