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Immediate Action

Magnificent and marvelous earth - an abode of ----------------HEAVEN Obsigning man to live a life in peaceful secure------------------HAVEN Thriving well to luscious fresh fruits and air surely -------------WILL Home and support the best possibility of life, humans -------- BE Enjoin! Counteract global warming and pollution-------------- PRESENT Remember, each day IMMEDIATE ACTION is NEEDED NOW--- HERE Elevate awareness! Empower all resources! ------------------- PRESERVE. Abstain from greed and corruptible acts, instead, ------------- RESTORE Resurrect nurturance and sensitivity, pour out nothing but---- LOVE Torment the devil and be like that of a compassionate--------- MOTHER Hunger! Thirst for better living here on our one and only ------EARTH... By Olive eloisa 5:17 pm April 22, 2014 CONTEST: ACROSTIC/ END LINE WORD SPONSOR: JARED PICKETT HONORABLE MENTION.. :) PRAISE God!!!

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2014 9:37:00 PM

OLIVE,Nice Acrostic, win...SKAT

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 2:16:00 PM

thanks Skat.. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/20/2014 9:18:00 AM

Great topic that you chose..A great winner..Congrats..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 2:16:00 PM

Thank you so much Sara.. :) God bless you always.. :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/17/2014 8:28:00 PM

We need to heed these words. Great one, Olive. Love, Joyce

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/18/2014 2:58:00 PM

Thanks much Joyce.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 5/17/2014 10:59:00 AM

Subject u chose really is demanding Olive ! What a wonderful to do an acrostic !! Appreciate ,, congrats on a great win !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/17/2014 5:05:00 PM

thanks much DR. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/17/2014 10:35:00 AM

Another emotive and strongly expressed write Olive_eloi!! Congratulations on the way you tackled it and for the winning glory:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/17/2014 5:10:00 PM

thanks much Paul.. :)

Ivo Cos

Date: 5/15/2014 6:01:00 PM

What a beautiful message! Gorgeous positivity here! All persons should apply this data contained within your first-rate Poem! I like a lot!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/17/2014 5:30:00 PM

thanks ivo.. :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/25/2014 2:13:00 PM

Remarkable, you did well with this acrostic! Many cheers my dear!!! :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/25/2014 4:03:00 PM

Thanks Casarah.. :D I appreciate your visit.. :)

Kamran Rashid

Date: 4/23/2014 2:24:00 PM

i loved reading this...a world is there

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/23/2014 5:42:00 PM

The world is here Kamran.. no else where.. :) God bless :) Thanks for visiting.. :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 4/23/2014 6:06:00 AM

Great acrostic. I envy your discipline in trying out this form.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/23/2014 5:40:00 PM

Thank you Scott.. :) why with thirtyseven, you are 37 now? :D? God bless..

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/23/2014 5:39:00 PM

:O I just tried Scott.. :) challenging and I was inspired at that time I made this.. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/22/2014 4:45:00 PM

Wow Olive_eloi!!! this was not easy to write! (I call this the double acrostic); you managed to pass on your message so clearly. Mother Earth must be proud of you :) Let's keep on beating our drums!!! // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/23/2014 3:14:00 AM

Thank you Paul for again visiting and commenting:) actually I was inspired by your poem:) and as well touched when I again viewed another video about nature awareness so this idea came to my mind..:)