Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Acrostic

Immediate Action

Magnificent and marvelous earth - an abode of ----------------HEAVEN
Obsigning man to live a life in peaceful secure------------------HAVEN
Thriving well to luscious fresh fruits and air surely -------------WILL
Home and support the best possibility of life, humans -------- BE
Enjoin! Counteract global warming and pollution--------------  PRESENT
Remember, each day IMMEDIATE ACTION is NEEDED NOW---   HERE

Elevate awareness! Empower all resources! ------------------- PRESERVE.
Abstain from greed and corruptible acts, instead, ------------- RESTORE
Resurrect nurturance and sensitivity, pour out nothing but---- LOVE
Torment the devil and be like that of a compassionate--------- MOTHER
Hunger! Thirst for better living here on our one and only ------EARTH...

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Olive eloisa
5:17 pm
April 22, 2014

CONTEST: ACROSTIC/ END LINE WORD
SPONSOR: JARED PICKETT
HONORABLE MENTION.. :) PRAISE God!!!

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Skat A May 23, 2014 at 9:37 PM OLIVE,Nice Acrostic, win...SKAT Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:16 PM thanks Skat.. :)

Sara Kendrick May 20, 2014 at 9:18 AM Great topic that you chose..A great winner..Congrats..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:16 PM Thank you so much Sara.. :) God bless you always.. :)

Joyce Johnson May 17, 2014 at 8:28 PM We need to heed these words. Great one, Olive. Love, Joyce Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 18, 2014 at 2:58 PM Thanks much Joyce.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 17, 2014 at 10:59 AM Subject u chose really is demanding Olive ! What a wonderful to do an acrostic !! Appreciate ,, congrats on a great win ! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 17, 2014 at 5:05 PM thanks much DR. :)

Paul Callus May 17, 2014 at 10:35 AM Another emotive and strongly expressed write Olive_eloi!! Congratulations on the way you tackled it and for the winning glory:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 17, 2014 at 5:10 PM thanks much Paul.. :)

Ivor Kos May 15, 2014 at 6:01 PM What a beautiful message! Gorgeous positivity here! All persons should apply this data contained within your first-rate Poem! I like a lot!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 17, 2014 at 5:30 PM thanks ivo.. :)

Casarah Nance April 25, 2014 at 2:13 PM Remarkable, you did well with this acrostic! Many cheers my dear!!! :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 25, 2014 at 4:03 PM Thanks Casarah.. :D I appreciate your visit.. :)

Kamran Rashid April 23, 2014 at 2:24 PM i loved reading this...a world is there Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 23, 2014 at 5:42 PM The world is here Kamran.. no else where.. :) God bless :) Thanks for visiting.. :)

Scott Thirtyseven April 23, 2014 at 6:06 AM Great acrostic. I envy your discipline in trying out this form. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 23, 2014 at 5:40 PM Thank you Scott.. :) why with thirtyseven, you are 37 now? :D? God bless.. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 23, 2014 at 5:39 PM :O I just tried Scott.. :) challenging and I was inspired at that time I made this.. :)

Paul Callus April 22, 2014 at 4:45 PM Wow Olive_eloi!!! this was not easy to write! (I call this the double acrostic); you managed to pass on your message so clearly. Mother Earth must be proud of you :) Let's keep on beating our drums!!! // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 23, 2014 at 3:14 AM Thank you Paul for again visiting and commenting:) actually I was inspired by your poem:) and as well touched when I again viewed another video about nature awareness so this idea came to my mind..:)

Ndaba Sibanda April 22, 2014 at 12:58 PM Olive,- carefully , expertly done. Great imagination. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 23, 2014 at 3:11 AM Expertly :o!?? Wee not much.. But thank you for the remarks it was nice of yo Ndaba to drop by:) God Bless:)

Constance La France April 22, 2014 at 12:48 PM Olive, a lovely and inspiring poem, well done Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 23, 2014 at 3:09 AM Thanks broken wings for dropping by and leaving a comment :) I appreciate it much:)

Olatunji Samson April 22, 2014 at 10:44 AM I love your work sis.KEEP ON. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 23, 2014 at 3:08 AM Thank you Olantuji:) I appreciate your visit:)

Aiyah Torres April 22, 2014 at 9:57 AM wow! how perfectly written... I'm impressed!! you are so talented ,olive girl... gl in the contest ~~ hugs!! ^_^ Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 23, 2014 at 3:08 AM Thanks much Aiyah :) salamat on the comments. :) I appreciate it much ;)

Tim Smith April 22, 2014 at 9:43 AM This is fabulous and you did it on the perfect day....Hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 22, 2014 at 3:20 PM thank you Tim.. :)

Verlena S. Walker April 22, 2014 at 9:26 AM Beautifully done Olive... Verlena Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 22, 2014 at 3:15 PM thanks Verlena. :)