Imagining Being Stars

Some say that when we die, our souls soar up and touch the sky, And even those with songs unsung across the universe will be flung. Perhaps to far-off galaxies or places that no earthling sees. Can you imagine places that no one has even heard of yet? The energy or spark we call the soul will not end up – I’m sure – in some black hole. I hope it’s true that we’ll end up in Paradise. Most would agree that would be so very nice! But maybe when we die, our spirits fly and change to brightness in the endless sky, Imagine if into the great unknown we go becoming stars whose destiny is but to glow! Think of other beings – maybe in another galaxy - in the future looking upward in their skies to see stars which have been named, and for even me– a misfit, there is a star with my name on it! Nov. 9, 2020 For Brian Strand's the 'ALL YOURS (Mar 4)' Poetry ContestContest
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Delaney Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 4:07 AM
Beautiful thoughts, Andrea: I have the same belief about our life spark. Since energy can’t be destroyed it will go on. Glad you won with this beautiful flowing verse. Hugs, SuZ
Goldsmith Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 9:02 AM
Congratulations on your win. It would be great to be a star for the night, looking down on the world. Enjoy your wonderful win an day...........................
May Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 4:30 AM
Beautiful write Andrea, Congrats on your win..
Watt Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 9:48 PM
Nice win, Andrea!
Ashley Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 8:02 PM
Andrea, it is my pleasure to return to your enchanting poem and offer you my congratulations for your wonderful win in Silent One's contest.. ~Susan
Y. Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 3:28 PM
Hi Andrea, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
One Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 8:50 AM
If we were stars, we would not last long.. just like in life.. Nice take on the contest..Congratulations on your placement..
La France Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 5:42 AM
Andrea, you have penned a beautiful poem, a winner for sure _Constance
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 3:18 PM
Yours is a well-defined, well-rhymed, beautiful piece, Andrea!! Good Luck in the contest!!
Kendrick Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 2:52 PM
I think you can pay to have a star named after you but God has already named them. Thanks for all the visits to my page. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara
Mcintosh Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 4:55 AM
Brilliantly done, dear Andrea. I love it :) Stars are such sensational and splendid pieces of nature to write about... God bless you
Pandit Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 4:21 AM
Lovely poem Andrea--of course there is a star with your name on it.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 1:50 AM
The universe is expanding to make way for the dead who became stars. What name will you get? ~~
Watt Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 9:38 PM
Your imagination soars, especially when envisioning the afterlife. Hope this is a winner for you ~ John
Brul Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 6:45 PM
A very heart-warming piece dear Andrea. There is so much dept in every line..A fave...For the win!!
Ashley Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 5:53 PM
Your poem is enchanting, Andrea. I adore your imaginings of being a star. You are already a star, my friend:)) Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
Y. Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 3:25 PM
Hi Andrea, This is a good entry for the contest theme! Wouldn’t that be something? I wish you the best of luck in contest. Enjoy the rest of your evening:-) Alexis
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November 9, 2020 at 2:26 PM
Wouldn’t it be nice if every star was an angel in paradise, scattered across the universe, seen but unheard. Yet, hearing every word said on earth, they’d pick out I know, all those they loved below, making sure they weren’t hurt or ever hurt anyone, so that a star in heaven for them would be reserved... lovely poem, Belle
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