Imagine Reality's Gone

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Breathe; deep breaths, fill your lungs with air, and feel the tension slip away. When reality seems unfair, call time out; you don't wish to play. Sever your tether to reason; and drift to the land of pretend. Meditation is in season; treat yourself like you would a friend. Breathe, simply breathe, deeply inhale; hold it; be one with the healing. Relax now, and slowly exhale; drifting away on a feeling. Lose yourself within who you are; imagine reality's gone. And morph into a shining star; shedding shackles of right and wrong. Breathe, take time to breathe, and you'll find problems aren't that hard to resolve. For, when you unclutter your mind, anxieties tend to dissolve.

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Date: 5/6/2018 10:22:00 AM
A beautiful read, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/6/2018 1:36:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/11/2018 4:28:00 PM
Wow! What wonderful advice to the anxiety ridden, OCD, and perfectionists of this world. For anyone who dwells on this fast paced spinning planet of ours Emile. It compeled me to stop and breathe...an excellent way to calm oneself and relax to heal. I really enjoyed this poem Emile. I think I will stop to meditate for a time now. Thank you for this gift my friend! xxoo
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Date: 4/11/2018 4:34:00 PM
Thank you Connie, your comments warm my heart my friend, Emile.
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