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Imagine if all the krill Beneath the ice shelves were dead. Millions plus millions of krill Fodder for ocean’s creatures: Penguins, walrus, whales. In the end all will die and the ocean Will be a poorer place for all. Imagine if all the trees Would lose all their leaves for ever. No Autumn splendour, No fruit, no place where to hide. Would we not be living In pure disaster? Imagine if there would not be any wind. No music to inspire, No words to adorn the arias, No emotion on men’s faces. We thrive on emotion. And what is emotion if not poetry? We simply cannot live without it. 20 January 2021 Placed 2 Can You Imagine - Any form Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 2/3/2021 3:19:00 PM
Congratulations on this splendid poem& your high placement. I much agree with what you’ve communicated. The state of the ocean is a huge worry! I hadn’t even thought about the krill! OMG help us all! Here you’ve written not only fine words but also the spur to incite some further action!
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Date: 1/29/2021 1:40:00 PM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my Can You Imagine contest with this wonderful poem, I like it a lot _Constance
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Date: 1/28/2021 1:18:00 AM
Great work Victor. Loved the last stanza. Congrats on your win with this wonderful poem. God bless. ~ Ani
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Date: 1/27/2021 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your last two lines. So very true. Enjoy your win/day with blessings........................
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Date: 1/25/2021 8:21:00 AM
The thought of thinking of our earth dyeing is unthinkable. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/23/2021 4:00:00 AM
I cannot imagine "Imagine if there would not be any wind. No music to inspire," and I certainly do not want to imagine "no words", but I imagine this is a winning entry in the contest.
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Date: 1/22/2021 8:21:00 AM
Very descriptive, Victor. A sad picture to imagine. Hope you have a great weekend :)
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Date: 1/21/2021 4:16:00 PM
A world without poetry would be dreary indeed! Your verse is an admirable reminder of how poetry answers the need for vibrancy, intensity-and magic-in the world. :=)
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Date: 1/21/2021 2:19:00 PM
WoW! Victor, You have composed a fine piece with a deep and well-written message. I found it to be sad as well.It's a winner in my book. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day, my friend-Alexis
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Date: 1/21/2021 12:21:00 PM
Sad indeed!
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Date: 1/21/2021 12:20:00 PM
Such a sad world that would be. Enjoyed your musings.
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Date: 1/21/2021 12:12:00 PM
wow, Constance will love this one, Victor. So emotive and fabulously expressed.
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Date: 1/21/2021 9:29:00 AM
According to science one day, it will be as you wrote...Stirring imagery and emotions.
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Date: 1/21/2021 8:28:00 AM
Victor, A land devoid of grace with tenants disappearing. Imagine offering up a place at the table to see another life bloom. -Richard
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Date: 1/21/2021 7:20:00 AM
Chief Dan George once said," If all the animals were gone then man would die of a great lonliness of spirit for all things are connected. A fine write Victor. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/21/2021 6:19:00 AM
Such a desolate world --hard to imagine! You reached into the depths of what could be, Victor --no emotion, no poetry--no wonder you call it a dead world. All the best.
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Date: 1/21/2021 4:54:00 AM
Lovely entry, Victor... and so true. A inspiration from your soul. God bless you always
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Date: 1/21/2021 3:50:00 AM
Simply superb, Victor. I am very impressed and FAVIng this! Panagiota
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Date: 1/21/2021 2:09:00 AM
... that sounds awful, Victor -no one can live in a dead world ... it sounds like a nightmare - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/21/2021 12:48:00 AM
It seems to be heading that way Victor, mankind needs to buck up his ideas on how he's looking after this planet. Tom
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