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Imagine

Imagine if the wind didn't blow anymore or the sun didn't disappear behind the mountains. Imagine if the barriers didn't exist, all free to enjoy what we have been given. Imagine if our wings had never been cut to be flying above our beliefs. Imagine if there were no soldiers to be sent to fight, no men death on the fire line. Imagine a life with all the skin colours making a new flag standing against the wind for everybody to kneel down. Imagine rivers with no blood but water to run through, free fish to swim in playing games for new beginners. Imagine if we all be embraced taking appart our differences, sailing on the same boat against the cruelty of life. Imagine to accept the unacceptable to join hands together to be only ONE
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Andresen Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 10:24 AM
- So happy that this poem was on the winner's list, Maria :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 12:11 PM
Thank you so much Anne. Have a nice eveningxxx
La France Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 11:27 AM
Maria, congratulations on your win in my contest, I love your music and that is one of my fav songs, Constance
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 11:52 AM
Thank you very much Constance. One of the best songs ever. Have a nice dayxxx
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 12:40 PM
- I love "Imagine" the song by british rock musician John Lennon from 1971 .... he was singing for peace and you Maria write for peace ... this is one of your best poems (that I have read:) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 1:04 PM
I can't imagine a world without your beautiful words Anne-Lise. Thank you so much. I appreciate it very much. Have a great evening. Thanksxxxand hugs
Y. Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 12:38 PM
WoW! Maria, Your well-written poem works so well with the iconic and legendary song. Each line stands on its own. I like how you painted a picture. Good build-up to reinforce and drive your message home. Your last stanza was a great ending to a powerful and relevant message. Excellent job. This is the poem of the day worthy. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 1:15 PM
Hello Alexis. Thanks a lot for passing by leaving such a wonderful comment. I'm happy you enjoyed my message based on one of the most beautiful songs of John Lennon. Thank you so much for your wishes too. Blessings!
Murray Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 12:01 PM
Nice little clip from John to go with your lovely vision Maria. Well done.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 1:09 PM
Hello Jean from Galicia, the Litttle Ireland from Spain. Thank you so much for your words and passing by. Have a nice evening up there.
Bowring Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 8:56 AM
Hello dear Maria. What a beautiful thought proving ‘Imagine’ poem you have created. So many lovely lines to reflect on. I love the imagery throughout and the reference to the flag. The lines,’ sailing across the cruelty of life’’ on the same boat is also a truly wonderful thought, hope. Really enjoyed it. Good luck with the contest with this heartfelt entry. Hugs and smiles to you my lovely friend xx :):)
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 9:02 AM
Hello my friend Christina. Thanks a lot for your always lovely words. I'm glad you liked it. Also thanks for your wishes. Have a wonderful Sunday my dear Chris!xxxx
Buhagiar Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 6:01 AM
How I wish these could be such an imaginative world. Alas man has ruined this world. Blessings.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 6:12 AM
Yes, very true Victor. Thanks for your words. Hugs!
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