Imagine

Imagine a black velvet curtain
Pinholed to allow specked light
Now imagine that same curtain
Endlessly stretching out of sight
And there you have the immense
Velvet blackness of outer space
In which I hang and float seeing
That speckled velvet any way I face
I suppose I am that lucky man
To know the exact second he will die
No single second longer possible
No matter how or what I try
For the oxygen of life is finite
In my cocooned fragile suit of death
I can rest here calm and unmoving
And so harvest every single breath
Or I can thresh and move and panic
Burn up my allowance fast
Never quite sure which breath
May be the next to last
I am speaking my thoughts slowly
There is so much I want to say
And I hope oh how I hope
I will be found some day
And maybe then just maybe 
Some descendant may know 
How much I loved life
And how I loved her so
I am that one lucky man 
Of our ship crew of five
The only one still here 
The only one still alive
Routine maintenance inspection
Left me suited spaceside and in luck
The only one to survive the hit
When that unknown object struck
My thoughts are now recorded
I am reconciled and at peace
I shall open this seam soon to cold cold space
And so choose my own moment of release
Cruel fate is perhaps a considerate friend
Allowing me the when to make my own end
Imagine a black velvet curtain
Pinholed to allow specked light
Now imagine that same curtain
Endlessly stretching out of sight
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Date: 8/26/2023 2:51:00 PM
I guess choosing your own time would be preferable in such circumstances. You depict a love of life that only few could imagine. Knowing the inevitable, yet feeling lucky to be the one of the 5 to have your space suit on, is questionable. Being a whimp. I would have wanted to go quickly as the other 4 did. This is a remarkable piece of poetry Terry. A fave
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Terry Ireland
Date: 8/27/2023 1:07:00 AM
I think this was inspired by some pf the scenes from 2001, A Space Odyssey. Fascinating thought - would you cling on or make the choice? Thanks Wen
Date: 8/26/2023 2:09:00 PM
wow! you've described this quite brilliantly, terry! you had me riveted...
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Terry Ireland
Date: 8/27/2023 1:09:00 AM
Thanks ilene. Have always been fascinated by space travel and the hazards of it
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