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Imagination

Power of a fancy over good reason, My imagination ! A force of nature trust or truth, delight of an immature? No war no red earth no remonstrance, A fascination ? Bumptious or chagrined deeply possessed neurotic, an absconding notion ? Pulling me in pool of love then announce exile, Inchoate insight ? My imagination makes me a fool, A weird hallucination ? Written by Dr. Upma A. Sharma on 21/5/14 Sponsor- Dave wood contest- Imagination Awarded 6th place Now for contest- One word title (new / old) Sponsor - SKAT A

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/29/2014 5:16:00 PM

Congrats on yet another win, Upma! Loved reading this poem once again! // paul

Skat A

Date: 8/29/2014 5:09:00 PM

Dr Upma, thanks for supporting my one WORD title contest. Enjoy the win. ~SKAT~

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/3/2014 1:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem Dr. Upma. Your talent oozes from your lines!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/29/2014 6:32:00 PM

wonderful win..>PD

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/29/2014 3:07:00 PM

Thought provoking I like how you incorporated the level of consciousness in your poem..:) Congratulations!!gbu

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/29/2014 3:22:00 PM

Thanks for real thotful comments n wishes Olive! Much appreciate!

Elaine George

Date: 5/28/2014 4:29:00 PM

Yes indeed. I enjoyed reading your poem. Very thought evoking. Many congrats on your win. Lainie

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/29/2014 3:23:00 PM

Thnx for lovely comments n wishes Elaine !

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/28/2014 1:24:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this unique poem, once again, Dr. Upma. Nice work! Congratulations on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/29/2014 3:25:00 PM

Thanks Kelly for wishes,, having lovely comments fm u is always a delight!

Joseph May

Date: 5/28/2014 11:00:00 AM

Congrats on your win Dr Upma

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/29/2014 3:26:00 PM

Thnx for being there Joseph !

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/28/2014 10:50:00 AM

love your sense of curiousity, dr. upma.. warm congrats and huggs!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/29/2014 3:27:00 PM

Thnx Nette ,, glad u liked,, appreciate ur comments //Upma//

Paul Callus

Date: 5/28/2014 10:24:00 AM

Love your imagination; like the take on this topic. [I expected to find 'truth' or 'dare' somewhere along the line:)] Congrats on a deserved win, Dr. // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 5/29/2014 4:28:00 PM

both versions make good sense, so the choice lies with the author! :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/29/2014 3:30:00 PM

Thanks Paul ! Yes I agree ,, shud be truth n dare in place of trust or truth,, sounds more powerful n daring ,, shud I edit ?? Thnx for valuable inputs !!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/28/2014 12:23:00 AM

A nice flight of imagination and congrats on a fine win, Dr. Upma

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/28/2014 5:14:00 AM

Thnx Dr. Ram ! u always r full of encouragement !

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/26/2014 6:18:00 PM

This write is great and very deep as well. Bravo on being able to pull that off so very well!!!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/28/2014 5:16:00 AM

Thnx Robert ,, appreciate ur comments !

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/23/2014 3:24:00 PM

Imagination is a mysterious thing, we never really know where our ideas come from, but they just do! I enjoyed this interesting poem, Dr. Upma. Great work! Good luck in Dave's contest!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/28/2014 5:17:00 AM

Thnx Kelly ! u r very right ,,, thnx for the like n much valued comments !

Aiyah Torres

Date: 5/21/2014 7:45:00 AM

very well done... I love your take to the theme... unique and outstanding!!! :O)) I wish you good luck, Dr. Upma!! ^_^

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/21/2014 7:54:00 AM

Thanks Aiyah ! Glad that u liked !