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Imaginary Universe

what truly does exist? is there any proof? do we hope to discover, anything beyond what we think we can see? in the end we are figments of imagination without imagination this entire world will fall to pieces! none of us will ever know because we never really were here, or were we? Suzette Prime: Prime number & Philosophy contest i used increasing prime numbers to explore and challenge my own thinking. every line is prime including contest name.

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/16/2013 2:34:00 AM

I liked the added touch of prime numbers to this. They bring a sense of logic to all the chaos and yet at the same time there is no known formula yet discovered that can accurately predict when a prime number will occur. I do believe without imagination reality would be quite dull and mechanical (a place I don't want to live in)... intriguing work!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/16/2013 6:47:00 AM

Thanks Timothy. Are you back now? Send me a soup mail.

Sharon Smith

Date: 12/16/2012 8:11:00 AM

Congratulations! Using increasing prime numbers certainly did make for a challenge, but I think you'd agree that it adds an extra dimension to the flow of the poem.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/16/2012 8:17:00 AM

Thanks Sharon

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/15/2012 6:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your top spot Blondy xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/15/2012 7:18:00 AM

Thanks Mandy.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/14/2012 9:03:00 PM

Hello Richard, falling behind with my comment,,, this is a wonderful win :-) , congratulations in the "SUZETTE PRIME:" contest... Goodnight :-) PD

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/14/2012 9:23:00 PM

Thanks Linda.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/14/2012 6:34:00 PM

Congrad's on your win in this challenging form Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/14/2012 9:26:00 PM

Thanks Debbie, I hope you lend your talent to my contest. After all you played a huge roll in me learning the terzanelle. I have really enjoyed writing in that form.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/6/2012 3:59:00 AM

and we would not have wonderful poetry from yourself either, which would be a great shame....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/6/2012 8:19:00 AM

What a nice thing to say Harry.

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 12/6/2012 2:05:00 AM

wow this reminds me of the movie 'Matrix' or another great movie 'Inception' i love all the questions this poem raises ..........about what is real or how real something is or maybe without the human senses and mind...we can feel be emoted and see so much more beauty that we would otherwise......ok...now im thinking too much philosophy.......but i like it LOL - Shaz

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/6/2012 8:18:00 AM

Thanks Shaz, it is good to see I got my point accross.

Dan Kearley

Date: 12/6/2012 1:21:00 AM

Great imagination with this one.Kind of makes you think...And that's what it's all about.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/6/2012 1:27:00 AM

Thanks Dan, good night.