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Image Moment Hiku

press the pause button of today & in an hiku replay

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Line Gauthier

Date: 9/26/2021 5:25:00 AM

charming ~

Brian Strand
Date: 9/27/2021 1:03:00 AM

A true&needing poetic gifting Line

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2021 4:25:00 PM

I really like this. I am also curious. Why do you say hiku? you also mean haiku, right?

Brian Strand
Date: 9/24/2021 1:07:00 AM

No,I use hiku Andrea for English language variations to distinguish from translations of the Japanese haiku

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/23/2021 2:09:00 PM

I like this. :) Sometimes we need to press the pause button, with life being so fast paced. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Brian Strand
Date: 9/24/2021 1:03:00 AM

That comes easier Brandy to us 80+++

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/23/2021 11:05:00 AM

A memorable haiku. Have a wonderful day, Evelyn :)

Brian Strand
Date: 9/24/2021 1:02:00 AM

Ypu hit on the key to being a poet,Evelyn,..memory

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/23/2021 10:54:00 AM

Few words with so much said. I love this, "IMAGE MOMENT." I do press my pause button. More now than ever before in this crazy world. We need to replay only good/great memories. Have a great/blessed day as you write away................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/23/2021 8:58:00 AM

Oh yeah, we can do that, beautiful thought, Brian:)

Brian Strand
Date: 9/24/2021 1:01:00 AM

Stay &... pray .then say Jo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2021 3:07:00 AM

I like this one. Reminds me of some moments in my life. I try to take a notepad so I can put some notes or a jot a few lines if I see something that is worth remembering. Sometimes when I reread them I remember that day when it happened but sometimes I don't. Thanks for dropping by my page and getting a few lines to jot yourself. Sara

Brian Strand
Date: 9/24/2021 1:00:00 AM

Yes Sara ..key to being a poet,especially those of us of the mature genre