Image In My Mind

I heard a monarch butterfly was floating on a leaf in a puddle
I thought of how beautiful that must have been to see!
And the light sailing on a leaf like that, feeling so free!
Some days, obligations and things pile up, freedom seems hard to find
But I will always seek it out, just like the butterfly resting for a while
	       - I will keep this image in my mind  -
Heidi Sands

10/5/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 10/6/2019 12:14:00 PM
I wish that I would capture and dwell on such things. You have such an artistic-poetic nature, my friend! Enjoy! :) gw
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Date: 10/5/2019 7:11:00 PM
Wonderful write, Heidi:-) Monarch Butterflies are beautiful!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/5/2019 8:00:00 PM
Thank you Edward. Yes, they are :)
Date: 10/5/2019 2:07:00 PM
remember that butterfly once hid in a cocoon carrying his burdens too before the transition to a beautiful butterfly... you...we all have some weight, we hide sometimes, but other times we are all free, in the light....beautifully penned Heidi...i love this and the image you painted! Simply gorgeous :) hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/5/2019 2:16:00 PM
That's right Sandra. Thank you so much for your kind comment and feedback on this. I am happy to hear you love this one :)
Date: 10/5/2019 2:06:00 PM
Great imagery, Heidi Panagiota. Xoxo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/5/2019 2:16:00 PM
Thank you very much Panagiota :)
Date: 10/5/2019 1:04:00 PM
This is so pretty, Heidi. May I think of your butterfly, too?
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Date: 10/5/2019 1:10:00 PM
You sure can Sunlite! Thank you for your kind comment on this :)
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