I'M Waltzing - Edited

I’m
waltzing
and 
waltzing
and gliding
with ease.
I’m 
so glad
I tried this.
It is a breeze.
With a one
two three
one  
two three
Darling, won’t
you please
waltz
now with
me?

March 22, 2023
for Emile Pinet's Waltz Wave Poetry Contest
Syllable pattern: 1/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/3/4/3/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/1

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Date: 4/3/2023 6:30:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... serenely delighting! God bless you.
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Date: 4/2/2023 6:18:00 AM
Wow! You make it look so easy, Andrea! Warmest congratulations on your win
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Date: 4/1/2023 4:56:00 PM
love the flow and the rhyme Andrea...congratulations :)
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Date: 4/1/2023 4:40:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea:)
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Date: 4/1/2023 11:06:00 AM
Delightfully light hearted, congratulations on your win Andrea!!
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Date: 4/1/2023 10:53:00 AM
This is a dance lesson I can follow! Congratulations on your win Andrea! :)
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Date: 4/1/2023 10:35:00 AM
I love your take on this waltz wave form, Andrea. I'd gladly take up your offer, but do watch your toes :) Congratulations on your fine win. // paul
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Date: 4/1/2023 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea! Your whimsical poem "I'm Waltzing", has earned you a distinguished place in my “wave" poetry contest. Though I was strict, your poem easily earned its place on the winners list my friend, Emile.
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Date: 3/23/2023 6:07:00 AM
Your poem glides with grace Andrea, best wishes in the contest, hugs
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Date: 3/23/2023 1:42:00 AM
Wow! Perfect for the 'waltz' wave, Andrea, I did on 'waves':)
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Date: 3/22/2023 8:32:00 PM
Fun Andrea, a fun and breezy poem! :)
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Date: 3/22/2023 2:55:00 PM
You'd have to wear steel toed shoes but I think I could count to three. A fun read, Andrea. Hoping you are well.
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Date: 3/22/2023 2:22:00 PM
Love a waltz and your poem put me right back inside it! Elizabeth
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Date: 3/22/2023 1:59:00 PM
yes…..very definitely dancey. Good Luck in the contest. SuZ
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Date: 3/22/2023 1:21:00 PM
Cute!
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Date: 3/22/2023 12:58:00 PM
your poem feels just like a waltz, andrea! perfect!
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