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I'M Thinking of a Place

  I’m
thinking
of a place,
a place far away,
far away from here
as I sail through the night,
a place where you are in my sight.
Yeah, I’m thinking of a place where I see you
so clear,
not here,
but there.
Yeah, I’m thinking of a place sailing through the cool night air,
getting closer to that place far away where I’m going someday.
Yeah, I want to go, have to go to that place far away
where I’ll hear you say, “I love you too.”


By:  Carole O'Terry Duet
Copyright:  2018
"All Rights Reserved"

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Line Gauthier Date: 12/28/2018 4:13:00 PM A beautiful poem, Carole. Congrats on your placement. Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 12/28/2018 4:44:00 PM Thank you, Line. I appreciate that and I'm adding a video to it by the group, The War on Drugs. Carole :D

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/20/2018 7:02:00 PM Came back to check out your entry again. I remember that I really liked it when I saw it again. I got inspired by seeing all the other people's poems. Sure wish more winners got put up. Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/22/2018 11:26:00 PM Hi Andrea. This was not the entry for the "concrete" contest. "Blocked" was. However, I'm glad you tried and read this one. Carole

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/21/2018 2:07:00 PM Hello Carole, i have enjoyed this one. have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 5/25/2018 11:57:00 PM Thank you, Darlene. Hope you have a nice day too. Carole :D

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/14/2018 8:16:00 AM I enjoyed reading this one again. Cool shape. Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 5/14/2018 9:38:00 PM Thanks, Richard. Did you listen to the beautiful music? Carole :D

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/6/2018 4:41:00 PM Hey, ALL RIGHT!!!! WAs it too late for the concrete contest? I hope not!! I honestly cannot think of a thing to do. well, something just came to me but maybe the contest is closed now. Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 5/6/2018 9:39:00 PM Yeah, thanks for the idea to make it look like a sailboat but it must be too late for the contest. That's ok. It's not that important to me. I just write whatever and whenever something comes to mind. Carole :D

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/4/2018 8:49:00 PM hey this is cool Was it for that concrete contest? I wanted to try that one but I just SUCK at that kind of thing!! This kind of looks like a sail boat!! Did you mean for it to? Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 5/6/2018 4:08:00 PM Hi, Andrea. No, this wasn't for a contest but check your soupmail. Thanks. Carole :D

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/1/2018 8:35:00 AM An emotional piece filled with longing. Well expressed Carole. Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 5/1/2018 6:28:00 PM Thank you, Richard, and thank you for reading. Carole :D

Elaine George Date: 4/30/2018 8:01:00 PM Dreamy and full of yearning. Beautiful writing, Carole. Elaine Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 5/1/2018 2:30:00 AM Thank you, Elaine. I'm so glad you liked this poem. It means a lot to me. Carole Duet

Maria Williams Date: 4/30/2018 7:27:00 PM Physical and metaphysical follow one another, each in their own time and for their own purpose for life is a continuation. Carole you are a brilliant poet, I feel the want in your words, such imagery this conjures. For me this is a definite fave, one to be read again, and song choice is perfect.....Maria xxx Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 5/1/2018 2:38:00 AM Thank you so much for your sweet comment, Maria. You're an angel. I must admit the song inspired the poem...along with my muse, of course. Carole :D xox

Charles Messina Date: 4/29/2018 3:24:00 PM Beautiful Carole...that place seems so far away, but sometimes you find it right in your home backyard.....Very nice and much enjoyed.....Charlie Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 4/30/2018 4:17:00 AM Thank you, Charlie. If that were only true... :D Carole Duet

Vijay Pandit Date: 4/29/2018 7:05:00 AM Such a delightful depiction..loved every word filled with anticipation, Carole! I enjoyed reading your poem while listening to the wonderful music. Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 4/30/2018 4:18:00 AM Thank you, Vijay. I'm so glad you "enjoyed" it and the music. Carole Duet :D

Viv Wigley Date: 4/29/2018 2:44:00 AM Lovely write and complimentary music, Carole, much enjoyed. Viv x Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 4/30/2018 4:23:00 AM Thanks, Viv. So glad you liked this one. My poetry is so simple compared to some of the wonderful poets' writes on this site but I still enjoy writing in my own little way. Carole Duet :D