i'm take'n you back

.
                           but
                  can yuh wait
                      'til friday

                      'fore yuh
                        totally
                   break down

                           i'm 
              think'n       wrote
                       write'n 
                       lets go
       at thuh perfect moment

                   tap tuh tap
                          tap

                          tap
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Nicole Avatar
January 11, 2026 at 6:04 PM
Waiting until Friday to break down. Hmm, that's possible, I suppose. Sometimes the heart can't hold those emotions in for that long. Many wonderful blessings to you, James. Hugs, Brandy
Peranteau Avatar
January 11, 2026 at 7:22 PM
') 'tiz uh typewriter dear poet....much love
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