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I'm Still Kickin', but Not Very High


Eerie grinding sounds rise from my knees.
Heavy housework’s no longer a breeze.
Though I’ve seen better days,
I must give myself praise.
Parts of me aren’t yet racked by disease.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Lillico  Avatar
November 28, 2024 at 1:25 PM
Congratulations! Better days indeed!
Canerdy Avatar
November 28, 2024 at 6:30 PM
Margarita, thanks so much for sponsoring and FOR MY WIN!! I'm over the moon. Janice
Bauer Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 11:45 AM
Your title reeled me in, Janice, and I’m glad it did! I can relate…
Canerdy Avatar
October 31, 2024 at 5:29 AM
Thanks so much, Ilene. Janice
Lane Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 4:57 AM
Aging is not an easy process, but we have to go through it. I'm grateful not to have issues. Good Limerick, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 6:39 AM
Thanks so much, Lin. I have arthritis, but I still get around pretty well. Janice
Cunningham Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 12:20 AM
Lol, getting on in years sucks big time, a new ache every day. Hope you're well Janice. Tom
Canerdy Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 6:38 AM
You're so right, Tom. Getting old is not for wimps! Thanks. Janice
Kyser Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 8:05 PM
Hurray! I took two advil, lol. And nice meter on the limerick, enjoyed it!
Canerdy Avatar
October 30, 2024 at 6:37 AM
Thanks so much, Jeff! I'm 72. When I was 65, I could RUN up stairs. Arthritis! Janice
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