I'M So Lucky

I know I don’t look like Brad Pitt 
imagine trying to stay fit
I am not a neuro surgeon 
I would surely be a virgin 

I don’t have Donald Trump’s money
but then girls think I’m so funny 
I will never sing like Jagger 
people say I’m not a bragger

I don’t drive a red Ferrari 
I like going on safari 
the whole idea of minister 
just creeps me to be sinister 

I know I’m so very lucky 
but I do dream of unlucky? 

- iambic tetrameter-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 5:31 PM
OH, I see you did a rhyming couplets sonnet. Modern approach and FUNNY. I sure enjoyed it, James.
James Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 1:12 AM
Glad you enjoyed it..
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 5:30 PM
hey thanks for liking my sonnet. I have TONS of them for ya. Just click where it says FoRM on my poetry list and you can find all my sonnets in a list. Let me read YOUR sonnet now!!
La France Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 8:34 AM
James, a fun sonnet, I enjoyed it very much ~
James Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:09 AM
im glad...i try to lighten the mood sometimes..
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