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I'm so lucky

I know I don’t look like Brad Pitt imagine trying to stay fit I am not a neuro surgeon I would surely be a virgin I don’t have Donald Trump’s money but then girls think I’m so funny I will never sing like Jagger people say I’m not a bragger I don’t drive a red Ferrari I like going on safari the whole idea of minister just creeps me to be sinister I know I’m so very lucky but I do dream of unlucky? - iambic tetrameter-

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Date: 4/24/2016 5:31:00 PM
OH, I see you did a rhyming couplets sonnet. Modern approach and FUNNY. I sure enjoyed it, James.
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Just James
Date: 4/25/2016 1:12:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it..
Date: 4/24/2016 5:30:00 PM
hey thanks for liking my sonnet. I have TONS of them for ya. Just click where it says FoRM on my poetry list and you can find all my sonnets in a list. Let me read YOUR sonnet now!!
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:34:00 AM
James, a fun sonnet, I enjoyed it very much ~
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:09:00 AM
im glad...i try to lighten the mood sometimes..