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I’m So Lucky By Kevin L Fairbrother Been working with a mate, building a deck round a pool 40 square plus and made of treated pine timber Big job for me for I am pushing 70 but me mate Well he is doing it tough and he is not yet 50 … He has a cruel inherited affliction and disease Which makes his life a living breathing hell Chronic Arthritis and Alzheimer’s combined Makes him feel like 100, 99% of the time … He tries his best to cope and be useful But he is frustrated and angry all the time I make allowances and encourage him Whatever help he chooses is fine with me … I sneak glances when I hear swearing and cursing I know me mate has forgotten what to do He comes back and asks, what did you want The poor bugger can’t remember what I said just minutes ago … Down the track for me mate will be a living hell For his future unknown and his life will be cut short Living with pain and bent nearly double His days are frustrating to say the least … His family and friends they all support him But there is only so much that anyone can do I help him by making time to have a yarn For every bit helps and it will ease his mind … He talks of having to depend on everyone That’s alright mate it helps you stay alive But what about down the track when I’m bedridden And my mind has gone and I can’t function … I know its hard Mate! But we will cross that bridge later And when it happens mate fore-sure you won’t be alone We will rally around you and your family and support you Meanwhile I suggest you live your life like there is no tomorrow I’m so lucky

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/25/2015 10:56:00 PM
Growing old is not for sissies, so they say. I guess that is what friends are for. We do what we can. Cheers, SuZ
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Kevin Fairbrother
Date: 7/8/2015 5:52:00 AM
Thanks and you are so right, cheers Kev
Date: 5/27/2015 11:23:00 PM
Kevin, wow, what an amazing write, it so heartbreaking, an impressive 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry
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Kevin Fairbrother
Date: 7/8/2015 5:54:00 AM
No worries Broken Wings, thanks for your kind words, cheers kev
Date: 5/8/2015 3:05:00 AM
excellent poem Kevin. I love the context of the whole of this poem how in every paragraph you jinks the atmosphere of sadness and torture into one of hope and happiness, thanks for sharing this write :)
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Kevin Fairbrother
Date: 7/8/2015 5:51:00 AM
Thank-you for your kind words and taking the time to read, cheers Kev

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