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I'M So Lucky

I’m So Lucky
By
Kevin L Fairbrother
Been working with a mate, building a deck round a pool
40 square plus and made of treated pine timber
Big job for me for I am pushing 70 but me mate
Well he is doing it tough and he is not yet 50
…
He has a cruel inherited affliction and disease
Which makes his life a living breathing hell
Chronic Arthritis and Alzheimer’s combined
Makes him feel like 100, 99% of the time
…
He tries his best to cope and be useful
But he is frustrated and angry all the time
 I make allowances and encourage him 
Whatever help he chooses is fine with me
…
I sneak glances when I hear swearing and cursing
I know me mate has forgotten what to do
He comes back and asks, what did you want
The poor bugger can’t remember what I said just minutes ago
…
Down the track for me mate will be a living hell
For his future unknown and his life will be cut short
Living with pain and bent nearly double
His days are frustrating to say the least
…
His family and friends they all support him
But there is only so much that anyone can do
I help him by making time to have a yarn
For every bit helps and it will ease his mind
…
He talks of having to depend on everyone
That’s alright mate it helps you stay alive
But what about down the track when I’m bedridden
And my mind has gone and I can’t function
…
I know its hard Mate! But we will cross that bridge later
And when it happens mate fore-sure you won’t be alone
We will rally around you and your family and support you
Meanwhile I suggest you live your life like there is no tomorrow

I’m so lucky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Delaney Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 10:56 PM
Growing old is not for sissies, so they say. I guess that is what friends are for. We do what we can. Cheers, SuZ
Fairbrother Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 5:52 AM
Thanks and you are so right, cheers Kev
La France Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 11:23 PM
Kevin, wow, what an amazing write, it so heartbreaking, an impressive 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry
Fairbrother Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 5:54 AM
No worries Broken Wings, thanks for your kind words, cheers kev
Gama Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 3:05 AM
excellent poem Kevin. I love the context of the whole of this poem how in every paragraph you jinks the atmosphere of sadness and torture into one of hope and happiness, thanks for sharing this write :)
Fairbrother Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 5:51 AM
Thank-you for your kind words and taking the time to read, cheers Kev
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