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I'm Shining--Just For You

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If I were any prettier— Well, I just couldn’t stand it. Yet, you won’t pay me any mind. Look at me. I demand it! Night after night, you sit outside romancing your fair lover. While you remain oblivious bright gems above you hover. Oh, now you’re waltzing on the lawn. Your next move is quite thrilling. While gazing up, you smile at ME! It seems I’ve earned top billing just for this moment. From afar, I’m proud to be your beaming star.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/12/2020 10:34:00 PM

Such a lovely relationship between you and the stargazer. Very tender. Congratulations on your win!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/14/2020 8:10:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sam. Janice

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/10/2020 10:33:00 AM

Love this! Congratulations, Janice!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/10/2020 11:04:00 AM

Thanks, Kim.

John Watt

Date: 7/9/2020 7:49:00 PM

Back again to wish you a well-deserved congratulations, Janice!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/9/2020 8:36:00 PM

Thanks so much, John. Janice

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/9/2020 1:16:00 AM

This has such a tender and innocent touch to the emotions of a little star. Loved your gorgeously soothing muse. Congratulations on your win Janice!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/9/2020 7:59:00 AM

Aditi, thanks a million! Janice

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/8/2020 10:36:00 PM

Cuteness just shines through this all the way. Yay for your placement in Nina's contest.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/9/2020 8:01:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jeanne. Janice

Eve Roper

Date: 7/8/2020 10:25:00 PM

I love the way you wrote the verse. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/9/2020 8:02:00 AM

Thank you so much, Eve. Janice

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/8/2020 10:12:00 PM

Now that I read this again, I see that it is not merely 'geniosity,' but that it's also right up Nina's alley! Congrats on your fine placement in this highly competitive contest, Janice! Smiles, Gershon

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/9/2020 8:04:00 AM

Thank you so much, Gershon. You are very supportive of other poets! Janice