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Im not good

Im not good nor great at poetry But when i read other peoples poetry Its like looking at the night sky I see the constellations up high And then i start contemplating my complications Of how i write Is it good enough ? A pencil in my hand My nose crunching My eyes rolling My palms are shaking I have to much on my mind When i think of words to write I see the ocean waving on the sand But im the one on dry  land I run blank for miles to think What do i say, what shall i write

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Date: 3/14/2024 7:11:00 PM
You've used a few nice metaphors here. Keep studying and reading the good stuff and you'll grow
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