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I'M No Longer a Deplorable

I’m no longer a deplorable Somehow become a fascist At least according to those who claim That all of us are all the same Except, that is, the chosen few Who really know what’s best for you Spend your money without thanks Lock up the sober in drunk tanks Some claim their states are RED or BLUE Thus, disowning half of you Yet my mailbox is at full bloat Beggars pleading for my vote I dare not raise the flag too high As passersby, offended, sigh And wish it hidden out of sight Its shadowed haven now a blight I’ve never been deplorable One time was thought – adorable I shed a tear at Taps sad drone For a flag that bravely flies alone John G. Lawless ©10/2/2022

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Date: 9/6/2022 7:26:00 PM
Deplorability - the key to stability. ~ Speaking Statistically
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Date: 9/4/2022 12:35:00 AM
John your truth stands tall. Some of the Leaders that have led deserve to be in prison for their actions against its citizens. God bless you for standing up and saying it like it is. You got my vote my friend. God bless you and this is a favorite for me. Keep shouting...
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Date: 9/3/2022 12:09:00 PM
I think the chosen few would classify me as a deplorable fascist. What a blessing that they are tolerant. I enjoyed your poem. :) ps
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Date: 9/3/2022 3:42:00 AM
I love this..Tells all.. We must follow our own hearts, and what is good for America..Thank you for sharing John
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John Lawless
Date: 9/6/2022 5:16:00 AM
Thanks Harriet, there's a line in an old 70's parody song "We'll use our hearts and hands and if we must we'll use our heads".
Date: 9/2/2022 6:10:00 PM
You are still adorable. I think one day we will all be forced to come together and be a whole country, 'till then! ~Anaya
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Date: 9/6/2022 5:14:00 AM
The won't build a wall at the border but have built one across the aisles of the House and Senate. Thanks for stopping by Anaya.....

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