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I'M More

You severed my wings
For your failure to fly
But I soar - 'cause I'm more
than your ex, or your why.

11/6/19

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 24, 2019 at 12:24 PM

Oh, WOW. Potent pithy perfection! Killer ink, a fave ~xomo

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 24, 2019 at 9:24 PM

Dang ~x

Michelle Faulkner

November 24, 2019 at 8:12 PM

Thanks - I was thisclose to entering it in your pithy poem contest!

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 16, 2019 at 2:47 PM

Hello Michelle Faulkrner, this is beautifully created by you. It will be my fav. have a nice day my friend.

Michelle Faulkner

November 17, 2019 at 2:23 PM

Thank you, Darlene-

Jennifer Proxenos

November 15, 2019 at 12:45 PM

Love it, well penned! A message loud and clear my friend! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Michelle Faulkner

November 17, 2019 at 2:22 PM

Thank you so much, Jennifer!

Caren Krutsinger

November 8, 2019 at 4:21 AM

This is TERRIFIC!

Michelle Faulkner

November 8, 2019 at 3:30 PM

Thanks, Caren, glad to hear it-

Pat Adams

November 7, 2019 at 7:10 AM

I love this Michelle. A FAV for me! Excellent rhyme, word play and a really great message. Very well done my friend!.......pat

Michelle Faulkner

November 7, 2019 at 6:52 PM

That means a lot, coming from the wizard of word play himself:)

Rhona Mcferran

November 6, 2019 at 11:22 PM

Ooohh, what a zinger!! Good one, Michelle! ;)

Rhona Mcferran

November 6, 2019 at 11:22 PM

Ooohh, what a zinger!! Good one, Michelle! ;)

Michelle Faulkner

November 7, 2019 at 6:51 PM

I am glad it 'zinged' - in a good way!

Gershon Wolf

November 6, 2019 at 5:00 PM

The truth, pointed and succinct. No more need be written! Precisely penned, Michelle! Warm wishes, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

November 6, 2019 at 5:21 PM

Thanks, Gershon (I am a fan of succinct!)

Kim Rodrigues

November 6, 2019 at 4:42 PM

Awesome write

Michelle Faulkner

November 6, 2019 at 5:21 PM

Thanks, Kim-

Chris Green

November 6, 2019 at 4:06 PM

Very clever Michelle. Love the word play in this.

Michelle Faulkner

November 6, 2019 at 5:19 PM

Oh, so you got the 'ex\why' reference! Glad you liked it, Chris!

Heidi Sands

November 6, 2019 at 3:40 PM

Excellent Michelle! :)

Michelle Faulkner

November 6, 2019 at 5:18 PM

Thank you, Heidi.

Ann Foster

November 6, 2019 at 3:11 PM

Wow. that was GREAT!!! Ann

Michelle Faulkner

November 6, 2019 at 5:17 PM

Thanks for commenting, Ann-

Jack Horne

November 6, 2019 at 2:15 PM

powerful & heartfelt write indeed

Michelle Faulkner

November 6, 2019 at 5:16 PM

Thank you, Jack.

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