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I'M More

You severed my wings For your failure to fly But I soar - 'cause I'm more than your ex, or your why. 11/6/19

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/24/2019 12:24:00 PM

Oh, WOW. Potent pithy perfection! Killer ink, a fave ~xomo

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/24/2019 9:24:00 PM

Dang ~x

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/24/2019 8:12:00 PM

Thanks - I was thisclose to entering it in your pithy poem contest!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/16/2019 2:47:00 PM

Hello Michelle Faulkrner, this is beautifully created by you. It will be my fav. have a nice day my friend.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/17/2019 2:23:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene-

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/15/2019 12:45:00 PM

Love it, well penned! A message loud and clear my friend! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/17/2019 2:22:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jennifer!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/8/2019 4:21:00 AM

This is TERRIFIC!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/8/2019 3:30:00 PM

Thanks, Caren, glad to hear it-

Pat Adams

Date: 11/7/2019 7:10:00 AM

I love this Michelle. A FAV for me! Excellent rhyme, word play and a really great message. Very well done my friend!.......pat

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/7/2019 6:52:00 PM

That means a lot, coming from the wizard of word play himself:)

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 11/6/2019 11:22:00 PM

Ooohh, what a zinger!! Good one, Michelle! ;)

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 11/6/2019 11:22:00 PM

Ooohh, what a zinger!! Good one, Michelle! ;)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/7/2019 6:51:00 PM

I am glad it 'zinged' - in a good way!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/6/2019 5:00:00 PM

The truth, pointed and succinct. No more need be written! Precisely penned, Michelle! Warm wishes, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/6/2019 5:21:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon (I am a fan of succinct!)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/6/2019 4:42:00 PM

Awesome write

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/6/2019 5:21:00 PM

Thanks, Kim-

Chris Green

Date: 11/6/2019 4:06:00 PM

Very clever Michelle. Love the word play in this.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/6/2019 5:19:00 PM

Oh, so you got the 'ex\why' reference! Glad you liked it, Chris!

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/6/2019 3:40:00 PM

Excellent Michelle! :)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/6/2019 5:18:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi.

Ann Foster

Date: 11/6/2019 3:11:00 PM

Wow. that was GREAT!!! Ann

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/6/2019 5:17:00 PM

Thanks for commenting, Ann-

Jack Horne

Date: 11/6/2019 2:15:00 PM

powerful & heartfelt write indeed

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/6/2019 5:16:00 PM

Thank you, Jack.