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I'M Lovin' It - Tm

She hums "Hmm" on my hymn, "I'm lovin' you" And runs to crawl in a Delmonte queue Demanding, "Better befit". Then cackling, "I'm lovin' it," Gulps my lovely gal there … Delmonte brew. * A 1st Place* in the following contest (judged on Dec. 31, 2020) Dec. 17, 2020 Trademark~~Quintain Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Sara Kendrick

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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/31/2020 9:20:00 AM
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Interesting work. I am wondering what that brew is. I did see on TV the other day when given fruit cocktail that had to be used in a meal and in a cocktail how the contestants responded to having to use it but they came up with some interesting meals. Thanks for participating in my contest. Sara
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/31/2020 7:02:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Sara, for the comment and the congrats!!
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2020 12:50:00 PM
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a peach of a poem, i remember the man from Delmonte liked to say YES, lets hope Sara says yes to a contest win:-0 hugs Jan xx
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/30/2020 8:20:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Jan, for this lovely comment!!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/19/2020 8:32:00 PM
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Good. All the best.
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/20/2020 1:05:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Anisha, for this sweet comment!!

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