Premiere Contest WinnerI'M Just Getting Started

i'm just getting started
unraveling the threads
of this tattered lonely soul
sewn so long ago

apparition's crooked hands
grapples the rusty needle
as she unsteadily threads the eye
...flashback to childhood years
where a mother ties the loop
of darkened threads
cleaved from her own spool

pierced by torment
of each aberrant stitch
i am sealed in the seams
bound, unable to break free
as i bleed through the confines
of my soul's weary cries

my blood spills crimson
through shadows cast
of harvest moon
as she rocks unsteady
upon the walls of mind
beneath the hum
of unsung lullabies
watching as i undo
each crooked thread 
sewn by her hands

unable to baste
with death's bony hands
she pricks through my heart
with soulless glower
as i disenthrall 
the last threads

i stitch her deep
within the weaves
of memories
and poetry
...i'm just getting started

September 18, 2019

Just getting started poetry contest
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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 6:43 PM
Hello Sandra Adams, your poem is like embroidery one thread at a time. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Chiri Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 5:17 PM
Sandy congrats on a well deserved top win!;)
Kauffman Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 2:33 PM
Pathos, sadness and hope all sown together in your winning poem, Sandra. Congratulations my friend. Hugs and blessings!
Ibeh Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 12:31 PM
Such a superb poem, Sandra:-) Heartiest congratulations on your first place win!
Crismond  Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 4:12 AM
What a sad poem the imagery was so amazing I was there watching you taking apart and reforming you. There's a whole generation of us trying to do just that. Congratulations, blessings, and luck :)
Adams Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 10:16 AM
Thank you so much Heather, i am glad this one came through so powerfully, it was my intention... hugs :)
Hamilton Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 3:10 PM
This is number 3 on the top 100, congrats on all the accolades you're getting on this gem!
Hamilton Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 7:01 PM
Click on best new poems tab it gives you the top 100. Basically it measures the popularity of a poem by the amount of views and faves it gets.
Adams Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 4:42 PM
wow thank you for the information John...how did find this out?
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 6:09 PM
wow, this is so amazing and well deserving of the trophy win, Sandy. When I saw the title, I went straight to humor!! I mean, that was where I WANTED to go but I never took the time to do it, so I never wrote a poem for this challenge. I am sure the humor would be much less appreciated that this poignant piece.
Adams Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 6:54 PM
Thank you so much Andrea, you know me and the painful writes, they go together like you and the love writes :) hugs
Pandit Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Sandy..so well deserved..but all your poems are winners in my opinion.
Adams Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 11:07 AM
Thank you so much my friend, I always feel the same about all your wonderful writes :) hugs
Scars Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 6:58 AM
wow! the depth is astounding sweet Sandy. You never cease to amaze me...Congrats on your well deserved win! :)-luloo
Adams Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 11:06 AM
awww Thank you for your comforting words this morning and the smiles you brought my way :) hugs
Cunningham Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 2:20 AM
This one nearly escaped me Sandra, an amazing piece of poetry, congrats on your top win. Tom.
Adams Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 11:05 AM
Thank you Tom, i was shocked by the high placement... hugs :)
Mcintosh Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 11:29 PM
This is so amazing. I absolutely love it. It's simply amazing... God bless you and Congratulations too
Agustin Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 11:13 PM
Wow! Congrats! Your piece reminds me of my great and wonderful Mom. God bless you.
Mcgee Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 8:11 PM
I just had to come back to say...I'm so glad one of my favorite poems of late got a first place. Yay!
Gauthier Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 2:37 PM
Wow, Sandra. Amazing haunting poetry!!! Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win.
Adams Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 7:02 PM
Thank you so much Line...i was shocked with this win :) hugs
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 2:13 PM
Amazing and then some, beautifully written tattered-sewn AH! ~ Aloha always William
Adams Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 7:02 PM
Thank you so much my friend...aloha :) hugs
Peterson Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 2:06 PM
This is too densely packed to fully grasp and enfold within a single read. I hardly ever return for seconds with poetry. But yours was worth it. In fact, it was necessary!
Adams Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 7:03 PM
Thank you so much Mark...sometimes my poetry goes way into the depths of emotions.... hugs :)
Blodgett Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:56 PM
So incredibly beautiful and interwoven stitch by stitch. Excellent write and a deserved win. Lonna
Adams Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 7:04 PM
Thank you so much Lonna for your kind words :) hugs
La France Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:28 PM
Sandra congratulations on your trophy win in the contest with this excellent poem!
Adams Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 7:04 PM
Thank you so much Dear Heart...it was a fun write... :) hugs
Green Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:19 PM
Congratulations my friend. It is no surprise to me that this amazing piece of writing took the top spot in this contest. Your talent shines Sandy
Adams Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:21 PM
Thank you so much my friend. Your kind words always bring a smile my way :) hugs
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 12:03 PM
Oh wow. So much. And a fave. Congratulations on a smashing win! xomo
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 4:11 PM
My mother was a seamstress, especially appreciated ;)
Adams Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 12:10 PM
Thank you so much Maureen for the honor of a fave and the wonderful comment :) hugs
Hamilton Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 11:40 AM
Wow Sandy, I think this is the best you've written, undoubtedly the best write in this contest! Just exactly what I was hoping for, congrats on a top win!!
Adams Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 11:47 AM
Omg, Thank you John your comment and win made me smile, thanks for always hosting these wonderful contests, your contest brought this powerful piece out of me, happy you enjoyed it :) hugs
Chiri Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 1:56 PM
This sure does have a wow effect on the reader Sandy! Great entry for the contest! I'd wish you luck but girl you don't need it you got this one!;)
Adams Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 6:28 PM
i need all the luck i can get...lots of good entries and it's a premium contest... thanks for your vote and stopping by today...:) hugs
Andresen Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 11:33 AM
- Amazing ... you starting a very special journey, Sandra - (a fave) - Best wishes in the contest ... I congratulate you in advance - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 11:50 AM
Wow Thank you Anne-Lise...i am honored that you faved this poem and deem it worthy of a win...there are some great writes out there for this contest.... hugs :)
Gondolf Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 11:31 AM
Wow, Sandy, your writing blows me away. This piece is so wonderfully written, I'm in awe. Best of luck in the contest, this is a winner in my book. Hugs, John
Adams Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 11:49 AM
Thank you John for your vote of confidence and wonderful comment...i have seen some good writes for this contest.... :) hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 9:27 AM
This is a cool take on the theme. All I can say is WOW! Hugs Rick.
Adams Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 9:30 AM
Thank you Rick...just what popped into my head for this theme...i never know the journey my muse is headed on until i start penning it :) hugs
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