Notes About The Poem

 

 

 

I'M Just Getting Started

"Bittersweet memories that is all I'm taking with me . . ." (From, The Bodyguard) ______________________________________ I'm just getting started- again, again I had to walk away from you we will be just shadows on the wall of time not meant to be a you and me no, sweet we forever . . . . my heart is already drowning in memories for you broke down my walls and found me waiting. . . helped me grow stronger and able to dream my dreams but we come from very different worlds oh, I will never, ever forget you . . . or the laughter, fun, and sharing we had you will always shake the ocean of my sleep and I will keep our love within my heart my heart is already drowning in the memories because you made me better, stronger I will hold you in my heart like a blanket of memory and now I am just getting started . . . with a new found life and path I set forth into the whirlwind that is this life and you cannot see my tears . . . we would only grow to hate each other in the end even though there was passion and lust that would have faded . . . because we come from a different place oh yes, life is a lighted window and a closed door You know, I could never fit into your world and you are out of place in mine . . . so, I'm just getting started with the new me I am ready to drink from the deep blue sky . . . ____________________________ September 18, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/I'm Just Getting Started Copyright Protected, ID 19- 1182-048-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the Premiere contest, I'm Just Getting Started Sponsor, John Hamilton Eighth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Romios Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 3:50 PM
Beautiful~ Panagiota
La France Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 8:52 AM
Thank you so much for the beautiful!
Mcgee Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 8:36 PM
You will always shake the ocean of my sleep...I went all soft at those words...an excellent write. Congrats.
La France Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 10:34 PM
Jeanne, thank you so much for your kind words and the congrats
Adams Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 7:30 PM
poignant yet beautiful ...love the way you penned this piece...so many great images with great flow...congratulations on your fine win my friend :)
La France Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 10:34 PM
Sandra, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations!
Roper Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 3:51 PM
Fantastic poem, Constance, congratulations on your win.
La France Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 4:07 PM
Eve thanks for the fantastic and the congratulations !
Gauthier Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 3:02 PM
Powerful poem, Constance. Congrats on your win.
La France Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 4:08 PM
Line thanks for the powerful and the congratulations !
Blodgett Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 2:16 PM
Passionate vulnerability! Great poem and congrats to you! Lonna
La France Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 4:09 PM
Lonna thanks for the compliment and the congrats!
Peterson Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:10 PM
A good job, which made me reflect on one particular relationship that you wished would last but knew it never could. I heard of her passing just the other day, and your poem let me relive the days and conclude just the same as you. What more could a poem achieve?
La France Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 4:12 PM
Mark thank you for the great comment and compliment!
Hamilton Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:02 PM
This is a very touching write Constance in your inimitable style, congrats on placing in my premium contest!
La France Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 4:12 PM
John thanks for the inspiring contest and for my placement!
Mcintosh Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 9:30 AM
So awe inspiring. I love this one. It rings of truth and is filled with beautiful thoughts. Prayers for more to come. Bless you
La France Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 10:29 AM
Regina, thank you for the beautiful and the compliment.
There Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 10:32 PM
If you don't mind me saying so, this made me feel a bit queasy. The way you depicted emotions throughout this piece and the sorrow of it all makes me tear up a bit. Powerful piece, Dear <3
La France Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 10:34 PM
Hello, thank you for the great comment and the compliment.
Chiri Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 5:49 PM
Wow amazing!;)
La France Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 6:55 PM
Brenda thanks for the compliment
Y. Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 5:05 PM
WoW! BW, When I tell you I liked this, is somehow not enough. You took the theme in direction that seems unexpected( at least to me). Sometimes I am so naive because I feel love can get you through anything. But does it? Coming from different worlds can be great in the beginning. But is it enough when newness wears off? I see you placing well with this fine piece. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. PS, I loved the film bodyguard and Whitney Houston. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 7:22 AM
Alexis thank you for the wonderful comment. I love that movie so much and Whitney"s voice was so magical, her death too soon. I hope John likes my poem too.
May Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 1:52 PM
Dear Heart get back to work, I need the competition. LOL
La France Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 2:33 PM
Hi Bobby, it is finished just checking it over for typos and such
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace