I'm Just Being Me


I may be just a hat but from way up here I can see 
that she has her clothes hung up like little soldiers
ready for service at the drop of a hat 
As I tilt my linen peonies and squint in her closet 
I see a mish mash of flowery designs and I cringe
She shops at the thrifty store down the road 
and I can see she favors cotton for it can breathe easy 
and her favorite colors are blue and sea green. 
The scent of her peppermint halo clings to her clothes 
like a tight fitting slip, that I know she doesn't wear. 
So many shrugs and so many t shirts, oh my oh my !
The one think I have noticed from my privileged point of view   
it that she owns no black. She thinks its for funerals, 
so she opts for vibrant colors and her favorite, is red. 
I know I am being biased because I'm her favorite hat 
and happen to be red but I must admit she wears me well ! 
Love it when she picks me up and places me on her head, 
like I were the cat's meow.  When she faces the mirror 
and says, " When I wear you hat, I feel like I'm being me" 
a peel of her laughter follows.  Each time she tilts me up 
towards the sun I must agree, she is who she says she is, 
a free spirit who loves life, to the fullest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Onclaud Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 5:10 PM
such an animated story, vie...we are gypsies dressed to please ourselves!
Rose  Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 6:54 PM
We are gypsies, travelling on the caravan of life, thanks for your visit dear Nette :)
One Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 2:34 PM
Always be you my friend, everyone else is taken.. A deep and personal poem here..
Rose  Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 6:54 PM
lol, as we get older we don't have time for fakery or flattery, thanks for your visit dear friend :)
Meadows Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 5:46 AM
A lovely poem! Enjoyed reading this.
Rose  Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 2:18 PM
Thank you Daisy, I love your Avatar !
Empress Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 4:37 AM
A free spirit that loves life, this must be written for the contest using words from your wardrobe! I love how youv played around with words so effortlessly and in such a creative manner. As well as the lines “ I see a mish mash of flowery designs and I cringe” that made me smile because i have some floral designs in my closet now i look at and cringe too. How clever is this! Best wishes and sending you light always angelic Rose
Rose  Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 4:39 AM
Dear Ink, how lovely to hear from you dear heart. I always smile when I read your comments. You and I would make a nice pair of flowers, wouldn't we ? lol. In God's beautiful garden, :) love you
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