I'M Just a Shooting Star

I look out the window as I take to the sky
I just spread my wings because I think I can fly
The darkness surrounding doesn't matter anymore
What the future has in store I'm really not sure.

Up above the clouds is where I think I'm free
Where once I was blind finally I can see
I look out the window but I can't see the ground
I drift through space without making a sound.

The stars are up above me but I can't look up
I start to feel thirst so I drink from the cup
Looking around things are not like before
Things that once mattered simply don't anymore.

I start to lose altitude as I plunge toward the end
I'm never quite certain of the message I send
Sometimes I feel like I'm just a shooting star
I burn up in the atmosphere before I get too far.

All of a sudden I find myself back on the ground
I don't feel so lost with the new friends I've found
I look to the future because it isn't here yet
I just can't believe my whole life rode in a bet.

I walk past the wreckage and it feels like the end
The final result wasn't the message that I send
The candle does flicker representing my hope
Maybe I can wash it away with just a little soap.

The light grows weaker as I begin to have faith
I just need some gravity before drift out in space
I feel as though it all just slips through my hands
Why this happens to me I just don't understand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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