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I'm In Here

I don’t mean to be mysterious
I think I’m basically an open book

At times more vulnerable
than I’d ever dare to be

It’s true I’m not much for volunteering
but I’ll tell you anything you want to know

Yes, to my detriment, I do hold back
and don’t express much how I feel

But I’ll never tell a lie, and if you persist
I’ll open up to share my every little secret

My thoughts, not just the deepest ones
are guarded much like Fort Knox

Yet there’s nothing I’d like more than set them free
it’s insufferable how their shackles weigh me down

Submerged, at times I cannot breathe
I ask you please to not give up on me                      



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology book ~CITYLIGHTS~ 2021

AP: 2nd place 2026, Honorable Mention 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Koplin Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 1:32 PM
I will never give up on you Line, thanks for sharing
Gauthier Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 2:47 PM
Thanks, Mark. So glad I can count on you ~ lol
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