I'M Free

He was a prisoner of war Four years as an abductee When they turned him loose one day He yelled, "I'm free, I'm free, I'm Free!" A boy standing next to a tree Had never seen, such a thing before He said, "So what, I'm already four!"

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/14/2018 1:39:00 PM

Beautiful... a word has a different meaning for different people...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/15/2018 2:53:00 AM

Am I free?

Pat Adams
Date: 8/14/2018 2:40:00 PM

Ummm....OK! Thanks for commenting Pashang!.....80)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 8/13/2018 6:01:00 PM

I am literally laughing out loud!!! Thank you, Pat.

Pat Adams
Date: 8/14/2018 8:07:00 AM

Wow! That's great but no...Thank YOU for letting me know!!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/13/2018 3:20:00 PM

O Pat, trust you to tickle my giggle meter!

Pat Adams
Date: 8/14/2018 8:07:00 AM

Thanks!......Have a nice day my friend!....80)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/13/2018 2:13:00 PM

Lol! ;D

Pat Adams
Date: 8/14/2018 8:06:00 AM

Glad you got a chuckle MO!!!!.......p@t