Im fine

When I say "fine," it's a cloak for the storm,
A veneer of calm that I carefully form.
Behind the calm words, there's a tempest of doubt,
A façade that shields what I’m truly about.

Fine is the mask I wear to keep peace,
A way to assure that my troubles will cease.
But inside the veil, there's a tumultuous sea,
Where my heart's deepest questions churn silently.

Fine is the word that hides what's unspoken,
A subtle disguise for the feelings that’re broken.
It's the smile that falters, the laughter that wanes,
The cracks in the surface where sorrow remains.

When I say "fine," it's not truly the truth,
It's a sheltering lie from my days of youth.
It’s the quiet retreat when the pain starts to show,
A way to keep others from truly knowing.

Fine is a refuge where I hide from the light,
A word that deflects from my struggle and fight.
It’s the surface of calm where deep shadows dwell,
An echo of what I’m too shy to tell.

So when I say "fine," read between the lines,
It’s not just the surface, it’s where silence aligns.
For "fine" often means that the heart’s not at rest,
A hint of the struggle beneath the façade dressed.

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Date: 9/15/2024 12:05:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Lauryn Luther
Date: 9/19/2024 10:23:00 AM
Thanks you Ms. Agustin, That means a lot.
Date: 9/13/2024 8:35:00 AM
So true, enjoyed this contemplative write, welcome to poetry soup
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Lauryn Luther
Date: 9/13/2024 8:41:00 AM
Thank You Unseeking Seeker! Just something I want to spread, because being fine is not what it used to be.
Date: 9/13/2024 5:55:00 AM
Nice first post Lauryn. Welcome to PS!
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Lauryn Luther
Date: 9/13/2024 8:12:00 AM
Thank you Tom! My first poem I ever wrote was the one on adoption.
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