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I'm Always Right Here

If ever you're feeling afraid or alone
whatever the reason may be,
please know I'm beside you, to weather the storm.
Just hold on, …… until it's gone.

Whatever the season, we'll face it as one.
Together, we'll climb any mountain that looms.
We will push back the clouds that have shadowed the sun,
till' the storms are gone.
~

Together we can search for tomorrow.
Together we will borrow the stars
They will brighten the dark with the light from above,
and will shine with a promise to bring back the sun.      

However we measure the things that go wrong,
we're stronger together, as if we were one.
Love can light up the way,
in the darkest of night,
until the sun and moon turn their lights back on.

~
Whenever dawn arrives without sunshine
or if the clouds come heavy with rain
I'm just a stone's throw away, you can call out my name.
And we'll hold on to each other till the tears are gone. 

If ever you feel things are falling apart,
or if ever you're feeling alone in the dark,
just hold out your hand, and I'll toss you a star
There is always a light, in the darkness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Thomas Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 9:33 AM
Carrie that is AWESOME!!! What is the title please? I'm good over here. And no rush, there isn't much to catch up on lol. Still having writing issues so just writing from prompts or experimenting with random forms. So happy for you!
Richards Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 5:45 PM
Thanks so much FJ. We are much alike,.....I've often had a writing block and needed a prompt or contest to get me going again! And as for writing a book, you could and should consider. I had no idea and would never have approached the idea without Craig, ....he knew the ropes. Good luck, and if you ever consider a book, I'll be the first to order one!! :) Thanks for the support !!!
Thomas Avatar
January 10, 2023 at 10:37 PM
This really is beautiful. You left the reader to determine who that helper is for them... lovely. Just wanted to pop by and say hello. How is your book coming along?
Richards Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 7:37 AM
Thanks so much for stopping by! I have missed so many of my old friends, and seems everyone except me has moved on! :) But thanks for asking,......our book is on Amazon, and I owe Craig much gratitude for twising my arm and giving me a push. How are you......I hope to catch up with your latest works! Thanks again FJ !!
Ray Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 5:31 PM
and that is the depth a friend should dwell in and beautifully executed
Fenn Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 4:47 PM
Beautiful! This should be set to music!
Agustin Avatar
December 26, 2020 at 2:44 AM
Thanks for this. Likewise, cheering you with blest Christmas spirit, while sharing "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
Horsman Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 6:59 AM
Love this positive poetry, Carrie, long time no see, but your absence does not mean you are forgotten....Stay Safe.
George   Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 9:27 AM
Such an uplifting poem, dear Carrie. Where are you anyhow? Hope all is well with you. I think of you often and reflect on your extraordinary talent. ~ laine
Richards Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 1:48 PM
Hello Elaine,....you were so kind to check in on me after so long. Yes.....I've been an absentee, but I am doing well and keep busy., I hope you are also staying healthy, and remain safe in spite of this difficult year for our world. After our long association with many of you on P. S. and I do miss my earlier days on the Soup.Good to see old friends! Thank you for being a great support as always :)
Poet Avatar
April 17, 2020 at 8:45 PM
Beautiful! I don't have your phone no. Otherwise I would have called you to come here and write again :)
Cornish Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 1:44 PM
I remember this so well and the melody--special thoughts - a perfect dance to the emotions--gotta return to face book soon--miss you Dear Carrie
Richards Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 2:43 PM
Wow......haven't had much interaction from the soup in quite a long time, so it was good to hear from you, Craig! Yes, you gotta come back to FB......I've missed seeing you too! And I sure did enjoy your contests here. The song-lyric contests were always a favorite of mine, maybe because I loved the music you chose. !! :) ;Now that I read this one again.....I know I could have done better. Sounds kinda corny without the music, ha ha! ....but maybe if you are sponsoring another challenge sometime.., I'll be inspired to come back !!?? You know I love the music! Thanks for checking in again!
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February 6, 2020 at 10:31 AM
These words are beautiful, inspiring and uplifting, Carrie. It is heartening to know that this (or any other) person can rely on 'you' to offer encouragement, help, love and understanding. ~ Warm regards // paul [ps...hope life is good on your side of the fence:)]
Allison Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 6:51 PM
Such meaningful lyrics Carrie, hope you will be back on soup again before too long:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:10 PM
I never knew you had put up a poem , just one poem in this last year. A beauty, Carrie. Miss you here.
Gauthier Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 8:14 PM
Lovely, Carrie. Glad to see you back sharing your poetry.
Horn Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 5:12 PM
Wow. You have not written any poems for quite a while. Would like to see some new ones of yours.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 8, 2019 at 12:53 PM
Hello Carrie Richards, these words are lovely. A masterpiece poem is what it is. have a nice day my friend. So nice to meet you. have a nice day my friend.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 9:25 AM
A beautiful devotion Carrie, in this lovely lyrical piece. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo
Richards Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 11:37 AM
Thank you so much Connie! You have always been so supportive and kind with your comments! I hope you are doing well these days! I've missed so many of my good friends on PS !!
Gauthier Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 9:17 AM
Congrats on your win, Carrie.
Richards Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 12:41 PM
Thank you very much, Line! :)
Sergi Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 4:31 PM
Hi Carrie : A very meaningful poem written with such grace and sincerity, I loved it
Richards Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 8:01 PM
What a lovely comment and compliment. Thank you very much Ralph!
Watson Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 5:08 PM
Yours was really meaningful and so well matched with the melody,Carrie. I have been inspired by your poetry since joining the site several months ago! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Best wishes....Wendy
Richards Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 7:48 PM
Thank you for such kind words, and once again, a big congratulations on your winning poem!!!
Haight Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 4:46 PM
Such has beautifully written lyrics to match the music, along with the lovely message presented in your words. Carrie! Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra
Richards Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 4:55 PM
It was fun to be back for this contest, and so appreciate your thoughtful words, Sandra. Thank you!
Leiser Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 4:33 PM
Your lyrics are exquisite and perfectly match the melody of the song, Carrie! I know you are good at this based on your past lyrical entries...congrats on your great win! :)
Richards Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 4:55 PM
And I loved yours as well, Laura. Glad to share the spotlight with you! Congrats to you too
Roper Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 3:31 PM
So tender and loving ,Carrie, this is so beautiful. Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve ~`*
Richards Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 4:54 PM
Thank you Eve, your comments are always so kind, and so appreciated!
Cornish Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 3:07 PM
You've got a special gift Carrie and I love it--spot on in both message and pairing! The romantic thoughts hug the reader.
Richards Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 3:25 PM
Thanks so much Craig! Your contests are always such great fun !! I have loved writing for each one!
May Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 2:16 AM
THIS IS PERFECT!!!! it goes with the music so well. WOW! Great Job!!
Richards Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 5:22 PM
Such a wonderful compliment! Thanks so much for the encouragement! :)
Michael Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 6:46 PM
Well done~ I like the crystal clear thoughts of your write...
Richards Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 8:26 PM
Thank you for this kind words, Arturo !
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