Notes About The Poem

While waiting for an appointment I was inspired by the way the light played tricks patterning a sheer unpatterned curtain, quite an illusion!

Illusions

An open window,
                                Sheer voile curtains blow,
                             Patterned by musing shadows;
                                Reflecting rambling vines,
                             Kissed by the provocative sun.

                 








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Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Roberts Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 8:12 PM
Had the chance to read a few tonight..always enjoy. I made a song , Not posted here and have had some good feedback where possibly I can land an advertisement on TV. What a blessing that would be at this time. Keep a happy thought for me . Blessings...
Calasibetta Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:57 AM
Hi Donna, Glad you enjoyed my imagery. What a fantastic opportunity having the possibility of your song become a part of an advertisement on TV~WoW! Sending Happy Thoughts our for you!!! Blessings, Paulette
Buhagiar Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 11:05 PM
Great imagery. Loved the illusion.
Calasibetta Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 5:24 PM
Thank you Victor, glad you enjoyed it. Hope all is well. Blessings, Paulette
Ball Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Nicely done Paulette with great imagery. I can see the curtain blowing in the breeze as the light shines through them. Good stuff. God Bless, JB
Calasibetta Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 11:09 AM
It was an awesome sight, I wrote the poem right there and then. blessings, Paulette
Skelly Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Voile curtains fluttering set in motion a lovely train of thought...Delice
Calasibetta Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 9:19 AM
Hi Delice, Thank you....it was an inspiring moment....I wrote it immediately. Blessings, Paulette
DiMino Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 1:30 PM
There is so much to be seen and heard in silence -- just being in the moment. Out of one's self, and observing. All the world has a voice. Beautifully said. Brava!
Calasibetta Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 6:45 PM
Ah...so true. Thank you Joe! Blessings, Paulette
Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 4:13 PM
ooohhh I really like this one!!!
Calasibetta Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 4:42 PM
Thank you Andrea, I was so inspired the image before me was breathtaking. Blessings, Paulette
Leffanta Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 11:56 AM
You must have been waiting for your appointment for a long time; doctor's office? But at least your perceived time changes everything! Enjoyed!
Calasibetta Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 2:46 PM
Hi Rico, actually is was a brief wait....but I was very inspired. I wrote the poem right there and then....my Dr. loved it. Blessings, Paulette
Romios Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 10:35 AM
Perfect imagery Pangie
Calasibetta Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 11:28 AM
Thank you Pangie, I appreciate your stopping by my page and commenting. Blessings, Paulette
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