Illusion That War Could Not Touch Us

Spring of 1971, happy laughter
Multi-colored flowers and happy faces
we drive painted vans our parents can afford
We pile in, meeting new friends, some potential lovers
Peppermint breath greet us in half beat valentine waves

Idealists abounded, we flash peace signs in the cosmos
Woodstock knocks around in our dendrite highways
We are determined to drowned out the Viet Nam War
Grayscale news is nightly sharing things that rock our world

We wear rounded rose-colored, or tiny squared off blue granny glasses,
Love beads and two-fingered peace signs resound in our brains
Our hearts are determined to remain child-like magical.
We concentrate on the goodness of strangers

We create our own ambiance we children of the night
Star lit beaches catch our mirthful dancing
Our laughter is excruciatingly loud!
A magical time with an illusion that Viet Nam cannot touch us

Until she does, drafting one son at a time - mostly poor boys
Farm kids and poor kids from Chicago or St. Louis.
Gallantry has not let them escape to Canada.
We dance harder, flinging ourselves into each other’s eyes
Falling in love with every one of the future slain, not seeing fodder.

Helping the disappointed drafted enjoy their last ten days
Giving them brilliant memories for when they are miserable
wetted down in swamps, expecting to die
Reminding them of normalcy before their trip to this unkind place.

Mama Cass and Karen Carpenter are joyfully singing their folk songs
None of us realizing how illusive happily-ever-after is.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hankins Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 9:17 AM
I wrote a long comment on this yesterday, but it didn't go through. PS has a glitch. This is a wonderful piece, Caren. Too bad Mama and Karen are no longer with us.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 9:48 PM
I love folk songs! I listen to them all the way to work and back every day! I love the 70's, even though the war was scary!
Buehler Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 8:56 PM
Your touching tale brings back memories, Caren. It is so well crafted, but tinged with sadness.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 9:49 PM
Thank you Evelyn. Tinged with sadness was this wonderful time.
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