Illusion of solidity

Contest Name: Illusion of solidity  
Line of inquiry:  
The dream seems real since we don a form,  
borrowed from elements of that domain,  
but if we simply chose not to conform,  
we wake up when desires to rest are lain.



              Illusion of solidity

Once I saw you waiting, seated there for me,  
And every day our silent love grew quietly.  
Your scent stayed with my soul in every part,  
You circled me like moon around earth’s heart.  
Spring bloomed inside my autumn garden’s air,  
And grief’s deep wound turned soft to healing care.  
You were my healer and my love combined,  
Joy fell like honey, sweet and undefined.  
Then sorrow cut like glass with edges thin,  
And showed the cracks I tried to hide within.  
The dream seems real since we don a form,  
borrowed from elements of that domain,  
but if we simply chose not to conform,  
we wake up when desires to rest are lain.  
Now time has turned, the dream has slipped away,  
You live in photographs and faded day.  
I’m left alone, with smoke where fire used to be,  
Chasing solid love that was never meant for me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kauffman Avatar
August 21, 2026 at 11:30 AM
Nazia, congratulations on your win. Blessings to you.
Sultan Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 8:52 PM
Thanks Sam Kauffman for your appreciation 👍
Poet Avatar
August 21, 2026 at 5:04 AM
Dear Nazia, my hearty congratulations on your win in the contest with this poem, which beautifully explores the concepts of impermanence and identity. BTW, commenting is a two-way road that keeps the inspiration and Muse always alive😄✨⭐💕
Sultan Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 8:58 PM
Hahahaha 🤣 Thanks sotto for your appreciation and time. Due to my professional responsibilities I am stuck in busy routine so unable to read poetry last 2 weeks.inshallah feedback on the way✍️
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