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Illusion of Blue

Mountain peak glows pure Reflected image, true blue Rocks floating, confuse For Raul's contest Sunrise

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/14/2010 6:54:00 PM

Interesting and well written Haiku, Doris. Thanks for sharing and good luck on the contest. Be well, Caroline.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/14/2010 5:49:00 AM

Hi Doris, like your last line! Well written Haiku. And thank you for all your kind comments..Gert

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/13/2010 5:09:00 AM

Great write in this Haiku. Love the image. Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/12/2010 1:18:00 PM

Good luck in Raul's contest Doris .. a very vivid description of the photo also.. luv your title too... my entry is Panorama.. lovely words ...luv.. Linda-Marie..

David Byrne

Date: 2/12/2010 4:52:00 AM

I can see the picture.....well done!

June Ellen Smith

Date: 2/11/2010 5:46:00 PM

I like Haikus. Very nice one. Ellen

Marty Owens

Date: 2/11/2010 4:56:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku....enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Marty

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/11/2010 2:45:00 PM

Good one, Doris. Smiles, Dane Ann