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'illusion'

she felt his heart beat
so identifiable 
an enchanting sound
her only recollection
of the man she use to love

the heart’s trickery 
has claimed another victim 
yet her heart still beats
is it just an illusion?
or will she find her way back?


Contest Name : “BAG OF TRICKS”
By	        : Wilma N. Neels


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Copyright © Wilma Neels | Year Posted 2011

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Lee Ramage Date: 7/27/2011 12:28:00 AM Spent this evening reading your poems, lovely night of enjoyment. Thank you Lee Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 7/25/2011 10:34:00 PM Congrats Wilma on your 1st place win with this beautiful poem. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/25/2011 10:16:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Bag Of Tricks" contest Wilma. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Amanda Moore Date: 7/24/2011 11:22:00 PM wow this is intense that last line makes this a total winner. Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 7/24/2011 3:52:00 PM Great writing Wilma, Many congrats on yor SUPER WIN .Lainie Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 7/24/2011 4:06:00 AM hey Wilma, congrats on a great win, David Login to Reply

Jun-Jun Villanueva Date: 7/23/2011 8:13:00 PM what a great poem. . .CONGRATULATIONS! ! ! *_* junjun Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/23/2011 3:52:00 PM Good one..Congrats on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 7/23/2011 2:20:00 PM I haven't been on Soup much in the last couple of days and have a ton of congrats messages to send - and not much time to send them in today! Forgive hasty message -many congrats on your wins : ) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/23/2011 2:01:00 PM My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Linda, Wilma Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/23/2011 1:39:00 PM Congrats Wilma on your first place win and thankxx for the support luv.. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/23/2011 1:39:00 PM Congrats Wilma on your first place win and thankxx for the support luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/23/2011 12:02:00 PM I"m glad to see this on the winner's list and high up there too! congratulations, wilma. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/11/2011 8:16:00 AM thankxx for supporting my current contest Wilma..good luck luv.. I got lost in the reading and was mesmerized by your words and I usually wait for judging but this was ultra magnetic luv..oh. Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 7/9/2011 9:03:00 AM Well thought up write my dear Poet Partner in crime...all the best for this amazing write.... You reading into my lines of Two Moons to one???? lol with love Michael Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/8/2011 8:04:00 PM great way to do the contest, wilma. I sure hope I understand how she wants it done. MIne is kind of different. But i guess people take the task different ways. I really enjoyed this take on illusion. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/8/2011 6:57:00 PM Lovely take on the bag of tricks, wilma Login to Reply

Zzzzz Zzzzz Date: 7/8/2011 11:43:00 AM A well thought out poem, Wilma. A bag of tricks in itself! What a wonderful thought..."she felt his heart beat"...magical! Best wishes for the contest-- Robert. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 7/8/2011 6:20:00 AM Excellent one Wilma.Thanks for adding my poem to your Favs.Best wishes for Linda's contest. Login to Reply