'illusion'

she felt his heart beat so identifiable an enchanting sound her only recollection of the man she use to love the heart’s trickery has claimed another victim yet her heart still beats is it just an illusion? or will she find her way back? Contest Name : “BAG OF TRICKS” By : Wilma N. Neels 080720111350

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Lee Ramage

Date: 7/27/2011 12:28:00 AM

Spent this evening reading your poems, lovely night of enjoyment. Thank you Lee

Kash Poet

Date: 7/25/2011 10:34:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your 1st place win with this beautiful poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/25/2011 10:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Bag Of Tricks" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Amanda Moore

Date: 7/24/2011 11:22:00 PM

wow this is intense that last line makes this a total winner.

Elaine George

Date: 7/24/2011 3:52:00 PM

Great writing Wilma, Many congrats on yor SUPER WIN .Lainie

David Williams

Date: 7/24/2011 4:06:00 AM

hey Wilma, congrats on a great win, David

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/23/2011 8:13:00 PM

what a great poem. . .CONGRATULATIONS! ! ! *_* junjun

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2011 3:52:00 PM

Good one..Congrats on your win..Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 7/23/2011 2:20:00 PM

I haven't been on Soup much in the last couple of days and have a ton of congrats messages to send - and not much time to send them in today! Forgive hasty message -many congrats on your wins : )

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/23/2011 2:01:00 PM

My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Linda, Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2011 1:39:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your first place win and thankxx for the support luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2011 1:39:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your first place win and thankxx for the support luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2011 12:02:00 PM

I"m glad to see this on the winner's list and high up there too! congratulations, wilma.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/11/2011 8:16:00 AM

thankxx for supporting my current contest Wilma..good luck luv.. I got lost in the reading and was mesmerized by your words and I usually wait for judging but this was ultra magnetic luv..oh.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/9/2011 9:03:00 AM

Well thought up write my dear Poet Partner in crime...all the best for this amazing write.... You reading into my lines of Two Moons to one???? lol with love Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2011 8:04:00 PM

great way to do the contest, wilma. I sure hope I understand how she wants it done. MIne is kind of different. But i guess people take the task different ways. I really enjoyed this take on illusion.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/8/2011 6:57:00 PM

Lovely take on the bag of tricks, wilma

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/8/2011 11:43:00 AM

A well thought out poem, Wilma. A bag of tricks in itself! What a wonderful thought..."she felt his heart beat"...magical! Best wishes for the contest-- Robert.

Kash Poet

Date: 7/8/2011 6:20:00 AM

Excellent one Wilma.Thanks for adding my poem to your Favs.Best wishes for Linda's contest.