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Light to my soul, heavenly bliss, If you forgive me Lord Loving you naught can be amiss, For penance I afford. Death seems ever so near My soul should be all clear Take me Lord there's no fear. Let the bells toll, Light to my soul. Quietus

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Valsa George

Date: 11/24/2021 2:41:00 AM

What a beautiful and soulful supplication to God !

Eve Roper

Date: 10/15/2021 7:45:00 PM

A prayer, a sad one..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/15/2021 1:54:00 PM

- A deep prayer from your soul, Victor - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Karen Jones

Date: 10/14/2021 1:58:00 AM

This one embraces death in a positive way A very personal conversation with the lord is uplifting despite death, with no fear. Great job.

Judy Ball

Date: 10/13/2021 2:51:00 PM

Oh WoW1 What a beautiful prayer poem this is. Loved it. A fave for me. God Bless, JB

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/13/2021 12:24:00 PM

A beautiful prayer!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/13/2021 12:07:00 PM

This touching poem is a beautiful expression of inner peace and trust in the Lord. Wonderful writing, dear friend.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 10/13/2021 10:41:00 AM

Awesome Victor... in Quietus form... So perfect and spiritual... God bless... ~ Ani

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/13/2021 10:05:00 AM

You are like a lantern burning bright, and so is your poem dear friend, may he leave you here long enough to write more poetry for us, :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/13/2021 8:19:00 AM

Lovely Victor, death comes to us all yet there is no fear once God has blessed us with the all clear… Belle

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/13/2021 8:02:00 AM

Wow! And a Quietus to boot! Brilliant write, Victor, so soulful, prayerful

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/13/2021 6:56:00 AM

So beautiful. I simply love this one!!! Amazing write. Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/13/2021 6:02:00 AM

Words of faith and prayer--expertly written in this hard to execute form. Many share the sentiments you express as we age. But not many have the courage, you show, Victor. Heavenly write!

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/13/2021 4:43:00 AM

My eyes well up with tears as I read your magnificent poem, Victor. Then what can comment about such a powerful feeling and heavenly apology? It's a bold poem about facing death, and you wrote it so perfectly.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/13/2021 3:03:00 AM

Hello Victor - What can be said for such a strong emotion and spiritual plea. Tears come to the eyes of readers. Because I have lost many loved ones who have suffered I am in full agreement that when someone is ready to rid pain and suffering that decision is most powerful and emotional. Love and blessings always not to mention health.

Karen Jones

Date: 10/13/2021 1:59:00 AM

Victor this is such a brave poem in facing death and you wrote it so beautifully. Ah there is no fear as one's heart is right and earthly ties are completed. Love love love how you talk to the lord in this.