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Illumine My Soul

Light to my soul, heavenly bliss,
If you forgive me Lord
Loving you naught can be amiss,
For penance I afford.

Death seems ever so near
My soul should be all clear
Take me Lord there's no fear.

Let the bells toll,
Light to my soul.

Quietus

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Valsa George Date: 11/24/2021 2:41:00 AM What a beautiful and soulful supplication to God ! Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 10/15/2021 7:45:00 PM A prayer, a sad one.. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/15/2021 1:54:00 PM - A deep prayer from your soul, Victor - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Karen Jones Date: 10/14/2021 1:58:00 AM This one embraces death in a positive way A very personal conversation with the lord is uplifting despite death, with no fear. Great job. Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 10/13/2021 2:51:00 PM Oh WoW1 What a beautiful prayer poem this is. Loved it. A fave for me. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/13/2021 12:24:00 PM A beautiful prayer! Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 10/13/2021 12:07:00 PM This touching poem is a beautiful expression of inner peace and trust in the Lord. Wonderful writing, dear friend. Login to Reply

Anitha Jayasankar Date: 10/13/2021 10:41:00 AM Awesome Victor... in Quietus form... So perfect and spiritual... God bless... ~ Ani Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/13/2021 10:05:00 AM You are like a lantern burning bright, and so is your poem dear friend, may he leave you here long enough to write more poetry for us, :) Login to Reply

Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/13/2021 8:19:00 AM Lovely Victor, death comes to us all yet there is no fear once God has blessed us with the all clear… Belle Login to Reply

Unseeking Seeker Date: 10/13/2021 8:02:00 AM Wow! And a Quietus to boot! Brilliant write, Victor, so soulful, prayerful Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 10/13/2021 6:56:00 AM So beautiful. I simply love this one!!! Amazing write. Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/13/2021 6:02:00 AM Words of faith and prayer--expertly written in this hard to execute form. Many share the sentiments you express as we age. But not many have the courage, you show, Victor. Heavenly write! Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 10/13/2021 4:43:00 AM My eyes well up with tears as I read your magnificent poem, Victor. Then what can comment about such a powerful feeling and heavenly apology? It's a bold poem about facing death, and you wrote it so perfectly. Login to Reply

Lisa Ricci Date: 10/13/2021 3:03:00 AM Hello Victor - What can be said for such a strong emotion and spiritual plea. Tears come to the eyes of readers. Because I have lost many loved ones who have suffered I am in full agreement that when someone is ready to rid pain and suffering that decision is most powerful and emotional. Love and blessings always not to mention health. Login to Reply

Karen Jones Date: 10/13/2021 1:59:00 AM Victor this is such a brave poem in facing death and you wrote it so beautifully. Ah there is no fear as one's heart is right and earthly ties are completed. Love love love how you talk to the lord in this. Login to Reply